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Chapter One

Chapter 1:  

Structure

Intro our heroes, basic plotlines

WhiteNinja vs. Red Ninja

Old Imperial Clan vs. New Imperial Clan

Characters

Good Guys

MainChar

2 Ronin

Origami Mage

The Entertainers

        Head Man

        Head Woman

Boy Prince

Mentor

Cooks Boy

White Ninja

        First Captain

        Soldier Girl

Bad Guys

Red Ninja

        FirstSquadCaptain

        FirstSquadLieutenant

        FirstSquadSargent

        First Squad

Chapter 1 Synopsis

MainChar is down and out in a backwards province, far away from court. While staying at a run-down old inn in the countryside He meets 2 Ronin, Origami Mage, the Entertainers, Boy Prince & Mentor.  That night the Red Ninja attack. MainChar, several other ronin, and a few other characters defeat a well organized ninja attack.

In the aftermath of the attack, the Boy Prince and his Mentor are recognized by MainChar. MainChar and the Mentor strike a deal to keep the Boy Princes identity secret. MainChar hires (swears in?) several other characters (Origami Mage, 2 Ronin, and the CooksBoy) to help protect Boy Prince. MainChar also protects the secret of the existence of WhiteNinja, who he saw fighting the RedNinja attackers. Mentor is seen meeting someone mysterious (the Fox Kami).  

Knowing the forces out to get the Boy Prince will strike again, MainChar fakes a move of the party to another inn that is more defensible in a nearby town. In reality, the Boy Prince and some chars stay at the original countryside inn MainChar, Entertainers, and Mage create elaborate illusions to create the image that they are stronger, while preparing to draw the attackers into an ambush at town inn.  But the illusions of strength are too good, and the attackers take over the original inn as their temporary headquarters while waiting for reinforcements.  

This leaves the Boy Prince in disguise as the CooksBoy, serving his own attackers with the help of WhiteNinja and Mentor.  At the town inn, CooksBoy is acting as the Boy Prince.  MainChar hears from mysterious source (the Kami, disguised as WhiteNinja), that the attackers reinforcements are coming disguised as a traveling magistrate.

Cut off from Boy Prince and Mentor and now desperate to get them out of the countryside inn before the attackers are reinforced (or the ruse is discovered), MainChar and the Entertainers go to the countryside inn in double layered disguise.  First as a visiting magistrate and his entourage, but that disguise is meant to be pierced, revealing them to be con artists. RedNinjaLieutenant knows that something is fishy and pierces the first disguise, but is careful as the “con artist” might be able to help him get to Boy Prince.

Contents

PAGE 1

White feather floating in the air / its red reflection in the water

MainChar is down and out in a backwards province, far away from court.

PAGE 2

While staying at a run-down old inn in the countryside

PAGE 3

He meets 2 Ronin, Origami Mage, the Entertainers, Boy Prince & Mentor.  All are staying at the inn, there is no  room inside so MainChar and 2 Ronin are sleeping in the barn.

PAGE 4

That night the Red Ninja attack

MainChar, 2 Ronin, and a few other characters defeat a well organized ninja attack

Each group believes that the Red Ninja came for them alone: the Boy Prince & Mentor; the 2 Ronin; the Origami Mage; the Entertainers; and MainChar himself

PAGE 5

fight

PAGE 6

fight

PAGE 7

fight

PAGE 8

In the aftermath of the attack, the Boy Prince and his Mentor are recognized by MainChar

MainChar and the Mentor strike a deal to keep the Boy Princes identity secret

PAGE 9

MainChar hires (swears in?) several other characters (Origami Mage, 2 Ronin, and the CooksBoy) to help protect Boy Prince

MainChar also protects the secret of the existence of WhiteNinja, who he saw fighting the RedNinja attackers

PAGE 10

Mentor is seen meeting someone mysterious (the Fox Kami)

PAGE 11

Knowing the forces out to get the Boy Prince will strike again, MainChar fakes a move of the party to another inn that is more defensible in a nearby town.

PAGE 12

In reality, the Boy Prince and some chars stay at the original countryside inn

PAGE 13

MainChar, Entertainers, and Origami Mage create elaborate illusions to create the image that they (at the town inn) are stronger, while preparing to draw the attackers into an ambush at town inn

PAGE 14

But the illusions of strength are too good,  (RedNinja POV)

PAGE 15

and the attackers take over the country inn as their temporary headquarters while waiting for reinforcements

PAGE 16

At the town inn, the CooksBoy is acting as the BoyPrince

PAGE 17

This leaves the Boy Prince in disguise as the CooksBoy, serving his own attackers with the help of WhiteNinja and Mentor

PAGE 18

Expose Mentor’s secret contact as Fox Kami (without explaining her)

PAGE 19

Kami learn that RedNinja reinforcements are coming, disguised as visiting Magistrate of EvilClanInPower

Fox Kami goes against her clan’s wishes to tell MainChar

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MainChar hears from mysterious source (the Fox Kami, but disguised as WhiteNinja), that the attackers reinforcements are coming disguised as a traveling magistrate.

PAGE 21

Cut off from Boy Prince and Mentor and now desperate to get them out of the countryside inn before the attackers are reinforced (or the ruse is discovered), MainChar comes up with a daring plan.

PAGE 22

MainChar and the Entertainers go to the countryside inn in double disguise.  First as a visiting magistrate and his entourage, but that disguise is meant to be pierced, revealing them to be con artists.

PAGE 23

(RedNinja POV) RedNinjaLieutenant knows that something is fishy and pierces the first disguise, but is careful as the con artist might be able to help him get to Boy Prince

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(RedNinja POV) RedNinjaLieutenant hires MainChar as con artist

Next Chapter: Chapter Two