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Chapter Four

Chapter 4: 

Structure

2 Ronin’s past intro

MainChar Scene (in Flashback)

Characters

Good Guys

MainChar

2 Ronin

The Entertainers

        Head Man

        Head Woman

White Ninja

Bad Guys

Red Ninja

        Second Captain

        RedNinjaLieutenant

OldImperialClan’s Vizier

Evil Diamyo of EvilClanInPower

Chapter 4 Synopsis

2 Ronin lead troops into the hills, setting traps and being clever.

At camp they have FLASHBACK to the days immediately before BloodyPalaceCoup;

        They are serving with EvilDiamyo, who is plotting to help overthrow OldImperialClan

        There is a setup where MainChar must fight a duel to save face for OldImperialClan,

        2 Ronin are disgused by their own Diamyo’s duplicity (??? why – are entertainers involved ??? )

        the 2 Ronin foil this plot by killing the conspirators (this is going against their own Diamyo)

2 Ronin are running in a circle to confuse EvilClanInPower troops, they get help from WhiteNinja

2 Ronin finally meet up with Origami Mage, and BoyPrincesLover, they slip past the checkpoints and head towards the lowlands

Contents

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1A Ronin and 1L Ronin flee thru the hills, EvilClanInPower Troops are close behind

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2 Ronin set traps ...

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and gain some ground

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2 Ronin set camp, tend wounds

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        FLASHBACK

        to Past at Imperial Palace, OldImperialClan is in power

        2 Ronin are serving with EvilDiamyo

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        EvilDaimyo comes to court

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        EvilDaimyo is plotting with EvilClanInPower (they are not in power yet …)

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        EvilDaimyo is plotting with EvilClanInPower

        Excuse or formal reason for duel, EvilClanInPower vs. OldImperialClan

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        2 Ronin overhear plan to rig duel

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        2 Ronin gather information

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        2 Ronin decide to defend Imperial Honor

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        Setup for duel between EvilDiamyo champion and MainChar

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        Setup for duel between EvilDiamyo champion and MainChar

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        MainChar preps for duel

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        2 Ronin set up ambush of duel riggers / saving face for OldImperialClan (going against their own EvilDiamyo)

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        MainChar Scene – duel

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        2 Ronin fight scene –

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        MainChar Scene – duel

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        2 Ronin fight scene –

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        EvilDiamyo is upset that his plans did not work out

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        He thinks 2 Ronin might be to blame but cannot be sure

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Drop FLASHBACK, back to present

2 Ronin have moved in a circle and are behind EvilClanInPower troops

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2 Ronin meet up with Origami Mage, Cook’s Boy, and BoyPrincesLover

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These 5 slip past the checkpoints and head into the lowlands

Next Chapter: Chapter Five