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S.A. Far commented on Granny Eyeball
Hi Charlie and Brandon, I read the sample. While I like the story synopsis in the "About" section, Granny came off as too mean to be true in the first chapter. It might be too much for kids to handle. Suggest toning down the Granny and devoting more attention to Joanna. Keep up the good work!
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