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Its Tuesday and that means another blog post.  This time I'm giving you a peek both into another continent on Pentaz' world which has been cut off by a jagged wall of sky high fire from the rest of the world since the Demon Gods' Invasion, and just how horrible a writer I was in high school.  Its a narrative poem I wrote in high school and have never once got around to editing and polishing.  All of the links in this update lead you to it.  Read it and laugh at how awful I used to be, then be thankful I got better.

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    Time for another book recommendation Sunday. I'm speeding it up to 5 books this time, mainly because my procrastination on starting this weekly update has led to quite a few of the books getting really close to their funding end date before I could get around to them. While I didn't intend it this way, this week sort of puts on display one of the earliest genres that attracted me to storytelling - science fiction. My fantasy geekdom may be more often on display nowadays, but I'm still a complete sci-fi geek as well. I'm a bit of a Trekkie, Brown Coat, and Whovian(my first love of the three was Trek and without it I may not have moved on to the others). My sci-fi fandom goes far beyond that though, with an especial love for the particularly cheesy bits(did I hear someone say Ice Pirates?).

    Enough of me geeking out over my own geek though, the point was that 4 of the 5 books this week are science fiction. Without further ado I'll get on with it. As always the links to the books are embedded within the titles, and links to the author pages are embedded in the author's names. After all 5 books I'll briefly list the funding time remaining on each.


     "The Continuing Adventures of Starbuck McClaw" by Jen Elizabeth Rose: I love this premise, and the prologue's delivery keeps me chuckling every time I see it. To better sum it up though I'm just going to quote from near the prologue's end.

    "That is where I will let the story begin, but before I do, here here are some important facts to know:

    1. Mummies are mostly from Egypt. They are dead people, very well preserved because of many chemicals, the dry Egyptian climate, and also wrapping them in cloth.

    2. Mummies do not have any organs. This includes the brain.

    3. A Brain is pretty essential for storing memories and thoughts and things like that.

    4. The shrouded figure/young man in a lab coat is named is Steve."


    "Dax Harrison" by Tony Valdez: I think this one does a great job of showing off both the shiny hull and the dirty outskirts of its universe. Plus I've always been a bit of a sucker for a captain who's at least a bit of a ne'er do well. The narrative also does a good job of changing just enough depending of the focal character to reflect that character's personality beyond relying solely on the character's actions, creating a story that has us learning about the character's through nuance as well as words and actions. To me this always serves to draw me in further, since it is the same way we naturally interact with and learn about each other. Read it and you'll both see what I'm talking about, and I suspect you'll also greatly enjoy yourself.


    "Feyside" by Peter Birdsall: The one fantasy book on this week's list. I must say I find myself getting lost in this one's descriptions, which for me is a good thing. The narrative paints such vivid imagery of both the settings and the characters(beyond merely the physical) that you can't help but be absorbed into the sight of as well as by the personality of each. Beyond this the excerpts currently up do a grand job of presenting the magic of the Fae in the manner I most often think of it(both grandiose and subtle at the same time), and interjecting that magic into the otherwise ordinary world(whether rustic logging camp or prosperous trade town) in a way that only increase the effect of wonder. Again, read it, enjoy it, and order it if you're even half as enchanted by this one as I am.


    "She is the End" by A.C. Weston: I may sound repetive here, but once again great use of narrative to describe both setting and characters vividly. You'll hear variations on those points often from me because honestly the two things I enjoy most about reading are being drawn into a new world to explore and being able to study well-written/interesting/unique characters. I suppose that's why sci-fi and fantasy have always been my favorite genres, because in my experience they deliver the most interesting/unique/breathtaking new worlds and characters to submerge myself in. The excerpts from this book exemplify both points, and it does it in a manner which is also wonderfully fast paced. Writing scenes that both flow at a breakneck speed and provide you with enough details to fully draw you in is(to me anyway) one of the hardest things to do, and A.C. seems to do it with complete ease. Read it and see.

    "Ghosts of War" by Paul Robinson: Okay, I'm going force myself to not be repetive over my enjoyment of narrative here, but its true of this one as well. It also does a good job of flowing as a fast pace, which shouldn't be surprising since it follows a group that I like to think of as "Delta Force or Navy Seals in Space". Don't get the wrong idea from my cheesy description though, its not just a blow-em-up action flick style of story. You do get character development and drama, which again is one of the main reasons I typically take the time to read a story. Ultimately as with all good books, this one's own words show itself to be a good book far better than my words ever could. So, as always, I have to suggest you read it for yourself and see.


    Since I'm posting this one so late, I'll tell you how many days there are for each as of tomorrow. There's 9 days left on the funding for "The Continuing Adventures of Starbuck McClaw", 12 days left for "Dax Harrison", 18 days left for "Feyside", 22 days left for "She is the End", and 27 days for "Ghosts of War". I know I've somewhat broken my own guideline laid down last week of focusing on books that haven't met the Quill goal yet by including 2 that have hit that goal in this week's recommendations, but they were just too good to not recommend them.

    Thanks for your time, and I promise to be on time with my blog post on Tuesday.

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      We hit 41 readers!  That means I get to do another giveaway.  So congrats to....

      Sarah Lindenfeld! You've won a signed copy of Shadow of the Owl!  

      Our next raffle tier is a big one, well at least it's a delicious one.  I will be giving away a $20 certificate to your local pizza place at 50 preorders.  We only have nine to go and I'm VERY excited to get a chance to feed one of you amazing people who have taken the time to support DHM.  Maybe it's the cook in me.  In any case, let's see how fast we can get to 50!  

      The book is now down to #4 in the contest ratings, but we have a month left and so anything can happen.  I'm going to continue my work getting more writing to you, and hopefully that will change any window shoppers into actual orders.  

      Have a wonderful weekend! We'll talk again at 50 orders!
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        It's been a month!?  How has it been a month since my last update.  Whatever.  Hello, Boulderoleros!  Do you ever feel insignificant?  Like life is just passing you by?  Like you're being manipulated by immortal beings with no regard for your well being and condescendingly pointy ears?  Good.  That's what the Immortals want.

        I've been doing some math and some shenanigans (never a good combination) and I've discovered that the Immortal Calendar is super cool.  Immortals have nine days in their week.  They have nine weeks in a month.  They have nine months in a year.  Do all that math and their years are 729 days long.  That's two of our years minus a day.  One Immortal year is two human years.  We're like dogs to them.  And yes that means they have two springs, two summers, two falls and two winters, but if you live forever, does that really matter all that much?  Does time really matter all that much?  Yes.  Yes it does.  Because you have to know when to go to war and when to go to war and when to go to war and most importantly, the most sacred of all Immortal traditions, you have to know when the times are good...to go to war.  Immortals loooove killing.  It's bad.  Mostly for us mortals.  I hope you're all having good, safe travels.  I'll be updating more than zero times a week for the next few weeks.  Feel free to follow me on Twitter for an array of shenanigans, mainly those pertaining to my book, but also, just things that are happening in my brain.  Also like us on Facebook if you haven't already!

        As always thank you for your continued and rad support.

        Earth, sea, empire.

        -NDF

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          Just a quick correction to my own misunderstanding which may have led some of you to the same misunderstanding.  Thankfully today I have had it pointed out to me that everyone who orders a physical copy of the book gets a signed copy even if it is only under the smaller Quill publishing goal, so now I get to come up with a new reward.  I'm horrible at this though, so I'm hoping everyone will come by my Facebook page(link embedded) and just tell me what you would want as a reward.  If its something I can feasibly do, then I will work towards making it happen after we have reached either funding goal.

          Also, I have just posted up the next section of Book 2(Exile, Hunted) Chapter 1.  Check it out at this link(about the same amount of spoilers as the last section really).  Enjoy!

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