Amanda Orneck liked an update for Blurred Weaponry (Saints of the Void, Book 1)

Hi, everyone. Just wanted to note a few things while I had the chance.

First, a big thank you to Richard Heinz, Amanda Orneck, Eric Landreneau for pre-ordering my book. As a reward, you each get a $25 Amazon gift code. Send me your email addresses ASAP to 48saints@gmail.com and you'll have them on 12/18, just in time for Christmas! (Maybe the 19th, I work like 10-11 hours and may hit the sack early on the 18th ^-^)

Feel free to use that as an incentive to buy more stuff on Inkshares - or hey, another ebook copy of Blurred Weaponry! Was that too much? Possibly. Likely.

I'll be giving at least one $25 gift card every two weeks. From now on if I get more than one pre-order, I'll calculate the odds and roll a polyhedral di thingie to figure out who wins. I'd give some away to Jeremy Thomas and Thaddeus Woodman, but as they are part of the Inkshares running crew, that might be weird (winky face, yo).

As far as Blurred Weaponry's story goes, the biggest change I plan on making is expanding the prologue to give the introduction more mystery. The new section will be about Mill, the so-called leader of the homeless enemies, the terrible things he had to do to get himself involved with Citizen Vaiss, and why he did them at all. That means likely adding one more chapter elsewhere to come back to his POV, but it will add much more humanity to the story as a whole.

Finally, please let me know what you think of what I've posted so far on my Inkshares page if you have time to read it some of it. Remember, I believe you get a $5 credit for your first excerpt pointed out / liked and $5 for your first content review (or comment.

Links:
Watch the YouTube stuff I made so far supporting my book @ http://bit.ly/1WuZhql
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    I wasn't going to update until we reached ten readers...and then we did!

    So that means I get to raffle off the first signed copy of Shadow of the Owl.

      Drum roll please...Or rather dice roll.  This is how we make decisions in the Orneck household.  Congrats to number 10, which is Rubydewey!  You'll get the first signed copy of SotO. But the great thing about this contest is that I will be raffling off again at 20, which means that those that ordered early get the most attempts to win the prize.  Super cool, right?

    Remember to share Deus Hex Machina with your friends so you have more chances to win!  As we get further along, I'll probably be upping the stakes, and maybe refreshing the contest as we start handing out the prizes.  

    Cheers!

    Amanda 

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      Announcing the Deus Hex Machina preorder contest!

      For every ten preorders, I will raffle off a signed copy of my fantasy novel, Shadow of the Owl!  We are one away from reaching our first raffle, so share with your friends!

      Thanks to everyone who has already shown support for the project.  It means so much that my fellows writers, my friends and my family think enough of the book to vote with their dollar.  

      Have a great evening!
      Amanda

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        Amanda Orneck liked an update for Blood Dawn

        I have a bit of fun to share with you!

        Last week I recorded myself while on a six-and-a-half hour writing marathon, writing Blood Dawn's climax -- and you can watch the whole thing in a 15-minute time-lapse video.

        Yup, 6.5 hours condensed down to 15 minutes. I just LOVE this video and feel it captured such an epic moment for Blood Dawn and wanted to share with all of you who soon will be holding this book in your hands and reading the complete story.

        Not only will you see the text whizzing by as I write, but you'll see all the funny expressions I make when writing, you can count how many cups of Starbucks coffee I drank, and watch me devour a pastry in about two seconds! Towards the end of it, you can see my exhaustion set in, as I begin to yawn repeatedly (which, in the time lapse, looks like I'm casting some sort of summoning spell).

        The writing marathon was worth it!  I wrote 28 pages in that one sitting, since having the camera on meant no checking emails and no distractions, period.

        Here's the video (SPOILER ALERT! Blur your eyes a bit if you don't want to know what happens when all the sh*t hits the fan):


        Goofiness aside, Blood Dawn is hurtling toward the end of the first draft, and still this book continues to amaze me.  I only have 40 or so pages left to write in this 800-page tome, and even this past weekend the story took me on a detour that I wasn't expecting, making the story's denouement even better -- and setting up echoes that will linger until the sequel.

        The first draft of this book is almost done and while it's been a wild ride, I've managed to keep the stakes and tension high, week after week -- for 63 weeks straight now, thanks to the weekly support of Author Accelerator. My structural/developmental editor is reading through the first 2/3 of the manuscript as we speak and told me there is some work to be done, but overall (are you ready??): based on her experience reading manuscript for Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Blood Dawn would warrant a full read-through. Wooh! I'm flattered (but still have my fingers crossed that she's going to tear it to shreds -- I mean, that's what makes rewriting fun and makes the story better!)

        In a few weeks I'll begin the major editing overhaul process so that this book is DONE by the time my Inkshares campaign ends in April.  And I am EXTRA motivated to see this project through to the end on my very strict schedule because Blood Dawn has already reached one of its funding goals and will be published!

        I still want to take this to the next level. If we can reach 750 pre-orders (double what we now have), then Blood Dawn will qualify for the Inkshares imprint, which means full and comprehensive editing, a much better quality book product for you to hold in your hands, and full bookstore distribution.

        If you haven't pre-ordered your copy yet, please consider doing so. (Click here to pre-order your copy.) And if you've already pre-ordered your copy, please share the Blood Dawn page with all of your friends and family who are fantasy fans and encourage them to order.  Or, if you're as excited as I am, you could order additional copies for yourself -- ebook copies are $10 and print copies start at $20. If you order 3, I will make you a GOD-KING and name a house/clan/social group in my world after you. If you order 7, you'll be a DRAGON and I'll add a dragon in my world based on your name, as well as give you a free t-shirt with the Blood Dawn emblem by A.C. Weston.

        Thank you for all of your encouragement and support along the way -- together we'll make it to the end and we'll see Blood Dawn on the shelves of local bookstores everywhere, and get more fresh Blood Dawn blood.

        Thank you, once again, for coming along with me on this journey. So much more ahead!

        John Robin

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