The plan for the story is set but the exact prose, the wording, the timing, is still amorphous as is clear by the change in the first chapter. Hope you enjoy.

That’s great — I’m already much more invested in your novel (that sounds flippant, but I actually am). I noticed a couple minor typos to stamp out, but it’s good.

Hi Adam, welcome to Inkshares! Your project sounds interesting — good luck here!

I was not expecting any followers on the book yet. Thank you to everyone  who has shown interest. I’m going to try and update the excerpt very soon. I’m working very hard, tweaking some story beats that aren’t behaving themselves. Thanks again.