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The forgotten tale of King Arthur’s brother, Prince Madog, who discovers America when he follows the trail of King Solomon on a journey to find and restore the Grail before its magic is extinguished and the world falls under an eternal veil of darkness.
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@P.H. James - great idea with scribophile group. If you could send me the details I’ll get in on that.

Pontus, Abigail, Catherine, Siriano - I’ve added your novels to my "to critique" list. My apologies, but it may take me a little while to get through them all, but I’ll keep chipping away at it. 

I can provide critiques via scribophile if you choose to use that site. If so send me a link to your profile and I’ll get on it (PS this is my profile).

If you don’t want to use scribophile, then my preference would be to send you inline critiques using a google docs file (using track changes and comments). However, to do that I’ll need to copy your excerpts into a google doc file stored on my google account. I will only keep the file as long as you need it to gather my feedback, and then delete it when you ask me to. If any of you have issue with that process, let me know and I’ll do separate notes and just DM them to you.

Cheers,

Robbie
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    @Matthew S. Adams - The basic account is good for getting a feel for the service. Key limitations I found were:
    1. Limit on how many excerpts you could post for critique.
    2. Limit on how many direct messages you could keep.
    The consequences for those limits are that to post more work for critiquing, you have to delete existing. However, you can save a PDF of the critiques you have received so you don’t totally lose them. Same with direct messages- it is good to engage (even just to thank) people who provide you with critiques on the site, but you will need to delete messages from your account to keep doing that.
    I used the service for 1-2 weeks and then paid for a full account.
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      For anyone who’s interested, I’ve just created a critiquing group for Inkshares authors on Scribophile.  I’ll be posting a formal announcement with the all the details sometime in the next few days.  Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions before the thread goes up.  
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        Dear friends and followers,

        As I said last update, this one’s a bit late. I hope you won’t hold it against me. I’m sure we’re all very busy, so let’s get right to the news.

        First of all, the third cheque to Chez Doris was written and delivered this morning. Not a stellar amount, I’m afraid, but one hopes the upcoming month will do better.

        Secondly, we have a second Peterkin Investigates Interactive Fiction game to go with the novel: "Point Blank Blank", in which it turns out that some of you (and your octopus friends too) may have been around for a bit longer than might be expected....

        And thirdly ... well, thirdly, what else is new? I’ve been away for a week. I’ve also been a little remiss in checking out the shelves at Inkshares....

        1) "Our Family’s Elephant", by Christopher A. Michaels. A perfectly charming children’s story about a pocket-sized elephant who may or may not exist. I think your inner child is bound to fall in love.

        The new G&S contest has a pretty broad category, and a few rules tweaks. It looks like a bunch of people have jumped onto the contest wagon, and I’m not sure where to even begin, now. I’ll think of something; in the meantime, browse and see if anything catches your eye ... keep reading. Have fun.

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