This story is shaping up to be one heck of a fantasy epic. You start off with a prologue that has Sir Ian McKellen reading it in your head, with mythological and fantastical beings all at once. From there, you enter the eyes of the mortals with a focus on the small details, the setting, and the mysterious Decemvirs. Divinity and magic, fantastical and mortal - all the elements are there. I look forward to seeing the rest of the words hit the paper.