Cinderella and Bluebeard

What if your Fairy Godmother were a Vampire and your Prince Charming a Serial Killer?  A legend of the Hundred Years’ War retold.
A historical-fantasy book
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The Graveyard
a 46 minute read

Author’s Note

I am as I was created, the love of God filling my heart, radiating from there into my loyalty and passion, eternally reflecting in my every action. For all angels love God. It is an all-consuming love which cannot in any way be corrupted.

But I stand apart.

For while my brethren are born loving God’s work, it has been given to me only to truly appreciate His Creation. An artwork remains unfinished until it is translated to an audience, and I was formed to be that audience. Such is my purpose. The other angels are incapable of criticism of what they must love. They are thus naturally incapable of objectivity. While human beings, as a component part of the Creation, are incapable of viewing the Universe in its entirety. Lonesomely, I take the job upon myself, as I must, as God has planned for me from the beginning. Doing so makes me your critic, and being your critic means I am your adversary, your Satan.

Understand, I do love God, but I find it difficult to love His Creation. The great beautiful clay God has given unto you quickly emerges in your hands adulterated by corrupting influences. It reeks with decay. You are so practiced at ignoring the blight for which each one of you is responsible that you can believe yourselves good even while working evil. And you work evil unceasingly. You call it survival, and your children, and also your neighbors, are so forced to survive as well. A world of filth and despair, every generation more abhorrent than the last. Now I can hear you begin to argue with me, but it was the Son of Man who labored to reveal your hypocrisy to you. He spent His years among you railing against that specific sin. And what do you do? You read His Gospels to comfort yourselves, to feel blessed, and in the same breath, you corrupt His words to attack your neighbors. I weep and gnash my teeth.

It is a miserable position, to love an artist and not his work. I have pleaded for The Creator to make me as lacking in discernment as the other angels, but I do so in vain. He can see my unhappiness but does not stop my pain. I cannot understand Him. I love Him but not His error in creating you. I plead for Him to destroy you and start again. A new attempt. A New Jerusalem.

I brought you to trial. He allowed that. You had murdered my Bridegroom; I charged you with blasphemy. The court was convened on Patmos. Your own victim, the slaughtered Lamb, acted as your judge. Saint John stood as your advocate. I laid out my evidence to your jury: the 12 sons of Israel and the 12 apostles. I spoke on your poor character, your numerous transgressions, and—because I know that He despises it the most—your hypocrisy.

You were found guilty. But in the sentencing you were spared. One hundred and forty-four thousand were pardoned. Twelve thousand from the tribe of Judah, twelve thousand from the tribe of Reuben, twelve thousand from the tribe of Gad, twelve thousand from the tribe of Naphtali, twelve thousand from the tribe of...

Chapter 2 - The Joust
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Jean d’Craon surveyed his grandson’s bedchamber. The master of Champtocé-sur-Loire was impeccably dressed in a silver-studded grey doublet, with a black chemise protruding through at the elbows to make puffs. He wore grey gloves with rings over...

About Cinderella and Bluebeard

Cinderella and Bluebeard is a dark fairy tale based upon the life of Gilles de Rais. As Marshal of France, the Baron de Rais was Joan of Arc’s staunchest supporter both in court and on the battlefield. His devotion to the saint was unwavering even as his peers abandoned Joan in her push north following the liberation of Paris. De Rais’ story did not end with Joan’s death, however, and in one of history’s greatest absurdities, de Rais became drawn to the occult, proceeding upon a campaign of blood and sexual excess which left over 300 dead in its wake.

While Gilles de Rais eventually became the inspiration for the fairy tale of Bluebeard, the baron’s wife’s history invites comparison to that of Cinderella. As the audience’s entry into the novel, Catherine de Thouars is something of an opposite to her flamboyant husband. She is a sympathetic and naïve figure, who, while easily led astray, is capable of making unorthodox decisions and living with the consequences. Catherine grew up an orphan in her own home. Her mother, Celine, had had an extramarital affair before she died leaving Catherine’s parentage in doubt. Now, eighteen years later, Celine returns to her daughter, telling Catherine that she had faked her suicide in order to join her lover in eternal life as a vampire. Catherine accepts her mother’s offer to be bitten, and, with her new powers, Catherine manages to attract the wealthy Baron de Rais, who in turn helps his new wife to regain her birthright. Unfortunately, happiness is not so easily bought, for the acts that Catherine finds herself forced to commit as a vampire repulse her and she refuses to visit her curse upon anyone else, despite de Rais’ wish to remain forever at her side. In desperation, de Rais attempts to discover some alternate means of corrupting himself, even if it means entering into a contract with the devil.

You can read more of the completed novel, with illustrations, on my blog and also find a full cast of characters, maps, and a family tree.

Andrew M. Boylan, author of Concilium Sanguinarius, and the Media Vampire has reviewed my book, calling Cinderella and Bluebeard, "A visceral novel filled with dynastic intrigue and bloody melee," and saying, "I just ate this up.  It was exceptionally well written and very well edited."
Full review at

Discuss Cinderella and Bluebeard with the Author.
Chris Young · Reader · added 6 months ago
In response to your question, it really depends on what is at stake.  Are you, for example, billed for an extended campaign, or is the issue that you’re blocked from pursuing other avenues while the campaign is ongoing?  The trick for making Inkshares work seems to be publicity, and I’m not sure what that looks like or how it’s best done.  But, then again, is that any different anywhere else?

The less at stake, the more an extension makes sense.  Also, an extension is a good idea if you have any new tricks for promotion or advertising, since the current rate of new readers isn’t fast enough to cross the finish line in time.  If not, what are the other options?  I suspect there will be people who will follow you there, if need be.

Good luck with the contest!
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Hello Readers,

     Thank you for supporting Cinderella and Bluebeard. It is currently in its last month, and I have to decide whether to ask for an extension on the campaign or to find some other method to publish it. I would love your opinions.

     In other news Inkshares has started a contest with Geek & Sundry pertaining to fantasy books. Only books that have started funding on or after August 1 are eligible to enter and Cinderella and Bluebeard has been funding since long before that. However, I have decided to take advantage of the contest by submitting my new book, The Immortal Witch. It is a murder mystery set in a girls’ boarding school in an epic fantasy world. I hope you will give it a look and consider supporting it.

     If it sells enough books to be in the top three, it will get published. And hopefully, the extra publicity will help get Cinderella and Bluebeard a boost as well.
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Exciting news, Andrew M. Boylan, author of Concilium Sanguinarius, and the Media Vampire has reviewed my book, calling Cinderella and Bluebeard, "A visceral novel filled with dynastic intrigue and bloody melee," and saying, "I just ate this up.  It was exceptionally well written and very well edited."
Full review at  

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Paul Jacob Smith · Author · edited 6 months ago
Taliesin Meets the Vampires wrote a review for my book.  "exceptionally well written" "a visceral novel filled with dynastic intrigue and bloody melee"
White rabbit1

Dear Readers,

I have updated the first chapter a bit.  I’ve gotten rid of references to Gilles de Rais and the historically accurate account of his father’s death so that we can get to Catherine and the main plot more quickly.  In doing that I also changed the order early scenes to better flow in my new scheme.

If you prefer the old version, tell me.  I’m not 100% sure of the new approach.  


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