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Reader Writer commented on an excerpt of Fae Child
It feels clear enough to me, but if you were to change it, perhaps it could say, "Sammy barked and tried to pull her back since she was still holding his collar, but the world spun around her again. It was like Abbie was caught in a whirlpool that sent tingles up and down her spine."

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    I was just about to highlight the exact same words! I love this line.

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