As a bloke! this is NOT a criticism by the way, I like to see a model of car, Volkswagen is great and gives a little to the character who drives it but if the model is shown such as’beetle’ or ’polo’ or just saloon, hatchback, estate even , for me it would help tie down the character even more! It’s a really small thing and you may pop it in a later excerpt or maybe it’s just the mechanic in me! It’s great read though really fab!
