Hi everyone!

Thanks again for being a reader.  I’ve added a bit to the story, and reworked some of the dialogue to flow a little better.  We’ve moved into some action now, and we find Billy going full tilt commando in the midst of his abduction.  Meanwhile, sinister forces are working behind the scenes....

Please, check it out!  And give me your feedback - I’m desperate for your input on this story as it unravels.

Thank you so much for your interest.  I hope I don’t let you down.

Hey there!  Wrapping up my lunch break today by updating this draft a bit.  I’ve incorporated some feedback, made some other changes, added things I hate and removed things I loved.  Then said "screw it" and added back some things.  

Then I got irritated at the whole affair and decided to leave it alone for a while. 

 Then I read it again, did some edits, and now I’m uploading it for you guys to check out!  I *neeeeeeed* feedback!  Please let me know your thoughts.  And I truly appreciate the brave - if you don’t like something, tell me and tell me why.   Thank you so much for your support and interest!