John Michaels followed Rochelle Campbell
Rochelle Campbell
Reader & Writer. Love scifi, horror, thrillers, & romance (esp historicals). I read all over...
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Fury From Hell
Good and evil collide in this graphic horror thriller. Detective Jennifer Holden has a past that won’t let her ignore it. Her badge, gun & the lotto get her through each day. That is, until Fury Abatu shows up and possesses the good detective...
John Michaels created a forum thread: Peer review and suggestions for Author's voice

    I am a new author and I’ve been inundated with great reviews from friends and family. Unfortunately, the kindly jaded views of friends and family are about as useful as pipe bumpers on a Geo Metro, so I’m looking for some more brutal and armchair type of criticism. I’m not a professional anything, and actually take constructive criticism pretty well, so please feel free to have at it! As with all second guessing authors, I’ve caught and continue to catch editorial issues and technical glitches in my writing. That being said, I welcome the same from anyone else who realizes that when brass checking a 1911, you see the shell through the slide as opposed to the ejection port.  *forehead slap*

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Thanks for reading, thanks for following if you like it, and thanks for helping make me better at writing!

*Edited to add disclaimer -  I am a former Marine. My work isn’t for the feint of heart. If you get easily offended by dirty humor or consider realistic vulgarity disgusting, my work isn’t going to suit your tastes. Therein lies the warning.*

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