I'm so grateful and pleased to see that Fall of the Forgotten has started to gain a following in the short time I have made it available. As a thank you, I have uploaded the next chapter of the book and will continue to do so for every 13 new backers the project attracts. I would also like to take this opportunity to ask for some honest feedback. For those of you who are following, but have yet to back the project, what can I do to entice you to pre-order a copy? I know the majority of us here are writers striving to have our work published and I want everyone to succeed, so I pledge to back any author who backs Fall of the Forgotten. The world needs more stories and everyone should have the right to tell theirs. 

This story has good bones, but it seems like it could benefit greatly from a little more exposition and detailing of the setting and characters. I feel like I'm staring at the frame of a gorgeous piece of furniture that just needs to be upholstered. And that's why I'm backing your book. I read through your samples and was left wanting to know more. I will be on the lookout for updates and revisions to this project.