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Definitely dialogue. I quite enjoy writing action, and short sequences of dialogue are fine. But when I hit a scene with a lot of dialogue (like I’m supposed to be writing right now rather than checking the forums) my writing slows WAAAAAAAAY down.
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    @A.C. Weston I find myself skipping over what a character looks like if I can’t fit it in naturally. You never want to fall prey to the "character looking into a mirror and describing themselves" trap. Sometimes I write in too much description and then delete it out before I move on. I have a good idea in my head what someone looks like, but it’s hardly ever relevant to the scene so I leave it out.
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      I have trouble naming people/places as well. Sometimes I’ll intuit an awesome name, and other times it will just take forever for me to find the right one.

      I really enjoy writing action sequences, especially fights. Sometimes I have to act it out to make sure it makes sense (act it out while sitting at my desk, it’s probably hilarious looking).
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        Action sequences make me wary, because I worry about being too wordy and clunky-- or not explaining enough about what’s going on. 

        I also rewrite dialogue a lot to make sure it sounds as realistic as possible. I find myself saying most of my dialogue out loud to make sure that it feels natural. 
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