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J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Spark Internal
Great action sequence.  Not boring, simple, and not overly cluttered nor confusing.

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    The spell spread through to the rest of his body as his pressed his advantage. It swung its second claw out blindly, but Cyael deflected it and forced its arm out wide before pivoting back and slashing his blade up, too tall to strike at his body, he brought it across the beast’s thigh
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    I would like a name for the council.  It gives more weight and mystery, which is so, so important in the opening paragraphs.

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