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I read through everything you have posted and I have to say that I'm intrigued. I normally don't like western stories but when written in first-person it really works well. I am looking forward to reading more of it but I would like to leave you with some constructive critique as well. One thing I would like to see is descriptions of tone and facial expressions.
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