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He knew that the shepherds were not best pleased with his depredations and would probably be a bit out of sorts.
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I quite like how this seems to mirror British society and history (Australia), or perhaps the other way around?
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    at the time the Royal Society had decreed this particular area Earth 9871 unoccupied, so the survey team had been completely taken unawares
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    Having grown up hiking in leech country, I completely sympathise! :)
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      And, there had been that disgusting infestation of sucking creatures that had attached themselves to his tender skin in the hollows of his front legs when he had tried to bathe
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      Two minor sentence structure suggestions, I’d: 
      1 - add a comma after "glowing,"
      2 - split this into two sentences, the first ending after "bronze" to emphasise the two states.
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        it once had a been a bright, glowing iridescent bronze, now it was a rather dull, sad looking coppery color
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