I would really appreciate if someone gave me helpful tips on naming characters and places and things I’m really bad at that kind of thing I just had to skip them parts to progress with my story .

my other little question is? should I break up my story somehow it seems really big this website when I was making progress writing my story it didn’t seem like that much to get a page or two I was really excited when he got to 10 pages now all the way up to 15 and very unsure but my gut tells me I should stick to my idea and my planning where I just ended my first chapter.

All, thank you for the support. Things have been progressing well...

I really appreciate any support you give to me this is my first time writing something I had great support from friends to bend about four months since I updated my book I’m hoping to get advice and feedback and encouragement really helps me push forward with created a work