Robert Batten liked an update for The Madness of Mr. Butler

Wonderful updates! 

First, the initial manuscript for The Madness of Mr. Butler, albeit not finished, is going quite well. I’ve even enrolled in Camp NaNoWriMo in order to hold myself accountable. The story has blossomed into something far beyond what I originally thought. It is becoming a story that surprises me as I bring it all together. I know that once I am done I will be handing in my best work. So, on with your much deserved apology, my dear readers. 

I am sorry that the story is taking a while to submit, but I’m also not sorry...and he’s why: 

Beyond it just being a busy place around here with infants and toddlers and new jobs and obligations, I am intentionally not rushing the story. This in no way means I’m being lazy. In the stats for Camp NaNoWriMo, I’m averaging 2300 words per day that I have occasionally sacrificed sleep in order to write, as there is no other time. I am putting in a ton of work on this book, and it’s all good work. The way I see it, when you all supported me and helped me win the contest, what I won was a publishing deal. A MAJOR publishing deal. And that means I work until I think the manuscript is the best it can be. I’m not going to hurry and get it done just to get you a book. That is not the habit of a professional author, and by being honored with a contest win, I intend to behave like a professional author. The great folks at Girl Friday are going to do their best with my book once I submit it, they can’t make it good when it’s not. 

This is a positive thing. I’m not down on myself or being perfectionistic. In fact, I’ve become quite flexible when it comes to the story. A lot of it has admittedly changed for the better, because once I got these characters interacting, the story became something much more than just about some crazy guy. At this rate, my little 241 page satire might push 300 pages. I’m not sure. Right now I’m just growing everything in the garden until I have to go back, transplant, weed, and mulch. 

So I’m not making promises about release dates yet. I’m making promises about quality. You will receive a great book when it’s all said and done. But I do apologize about the wait. It honestly takes a long time to produce any book. You just happened to be there for the moment the agent approved to sell the idea, which is waaaay ahead of publication for any book. 

In the meantime, I still have stuff for you to read. 

I want to give you a free book if you’d like. It’s only a first draft, but if you email me at madmrbutler@gmail.com, I’ll send you a PDF of An Adventure with Dada, a book I finished during last NaNoWriMo. I’m not bugging you to buy it this time. I’ve been told that I was crazy to try and fund another book, and perhaps those who said that were right. The funding campaign ends in 9 days, and I have 143 copies left to sell in order to make Quill. I could ask for an extension, like so many others have, but I’m going to respectfully bow out and let this one expire and revert to draft. This means those of you who invested (THANK YOU!!!!) will get your money back (unless it completes a Hail Mary in the next week), and the book reverts to draft format. Those of you who chose to follow the book will still be followers, if you wish to be. My plan for that book is to maybe try again after I submit the Butler manuscript. I just need to give Mr. Butler my full attention right now, so it’s time for that campaign to be done. Thank you for your time, support, and attention. If you want a free copy, like I said, just let me know. (I’ve been told it’s quite a fun book with a great story, actually.)

On a side note, I started a draft for an idea I’ve kicked around for a little while. It’s called "The Widower’s Wife," and it’s going to be a bizarre comedy. It’s about a grumpy curmudgeon whose nagging wife dies suddenly, and just as he thinks he is about to get to spend his last years in peace, her ghost starts haunting him relentlessly. It’s just an idea, but if you want to follow that or check it out, I’d appreciate it. 

If you’re curious about some of the changes I’ve made to The Madness of Mr. Butler, head on over to the page, because several days ago I quite sneakily updated the teaser, synopsis, and I took down the old chapters and put up a new draft of the prologue. 

I hope you enjoy!

Have a great summer everyone!

-Michael

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    Robert Batten liked an update for Mission 51

    Only 21 days of funding remain for Mission 51. I would love to see 9 pre-orders over the weekend. Can you help? Here is how:

    1. If you have not yet pre-ordered, please click the green button below and follow the pre-order links. Time is of the essence. I need 4.2 pre-orders a day to qualify for Inkshares’ Quill publication services!

    2. If you have already pre-ordered a copy of Mission 51, thank you! Now please take a moment to gently encourage/persuade (harass!) a friend to do the same! :-)

    3. If you have already pre-ordered a copy, consider purchasing another one, for a friend, family, or neighbor. It could be a birthday present, or an early Christmas present. Particularly good for readers! :-)

    Thanks again, everyone! YOU are the ones launching Mission 51, and I greatly appreciate it!

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      Robert Batten sent an update for Human Resources

      It has been a couple of weeks since my last update on Human Resources, so I thought I should let you know how it is progressing.

      The novel has received another two recommendations, which is exciting and flattering:

      "Fast-paced and engaging, I can’t wait to see how Human Resources ends! Please check it out!"


      "Add this to your reading list. Instantly you are drawn into this world, fighting for your life alongside the characters. Do it, check it out now!"


      The re-write continues apace and is about to accelerate; I’ve made arrangements which should see 1-2 complete days dedicated to writing each week (rather than just the hours of 9-12 in the evening). I’ve now re-written over half of the manuscript, as well as continuing to return to earlier chapters and tweak them. 

      A discussion on the forums led me to being introduced to Scribophile (author critiquing community) by P.H. James, and I’ve received some excellent critiques there already. You can find my profile on Scribophile here.

      Most of my time has been focused on chapters not currently up on Inkshares, but I have made some small improvements to the two prologue excerpts (they provide a little extra information now, and a general cleanup), plus I’ve changed the ending to the fourth excerpt (Mission Report).

      Call out to other Inkshares projects I think worth investigating:

      • Tantalus Depths (Evan Graham, funding): This was the first book I pre-ordered on Inkshares and I’m really excited it has easily cruised past Quill to start closing in on a full publishing deal. Epic space opera with a massive amount of depth - sci-fi fans need to look this up.
      • The Lamplighter’s Apprentice (Dash McCallum, funding): The Lamplighter’s Apprentice didn’t just draw me in, it swallowed me whole and without warning. Dash’s writing is fluid and beautifully descriptive as he unveils his premise for us. Even without the twist, providing a supernatural element that I can’t wait to explore, the story had me hooked. The characters are realised so well I feel I know them after only a few short paragraphs and the contemporary setting of a small indie developer thrust into a choice between accepting "the dream" offer, or staying true to their project, one that will resonate. This is a book that has me excited.
      • Drift (Danielle Mohr, draft): I fell in love with the world of Drift from the first couple of sentences. Brought to life in an understated manner from an interesting viewpoint, the first chapters wrap themselves around you with their unanswered questions and intriguing plot. I completely lost myself in the available excerpts and am now waiting impatiently for my opportunity to order the full book.


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        Robert Batten recommended The Children of the Forest
        Beautifully written fantasy which had me hooked from the prologue.
        The Children of the Forest
        A young princess and others must band together to save their world from imminent ecological collapse in this fantasy-adventure story, reminiscent of Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings and Herbert’s Dune.
        Robert Batten liked the forum thread, More Readers
        There are some good points and questions here, so I think I’ll weigh in on a few of them.

        Re: Readers - Yes, we need more readers on the site. Yes, that is the goal that Inkshares is currently focused on. But, we aren’t there yet. That is why it’s in everyone’s best interest that those of us campaigning now should focus on bringing readers in from the outside world.
        Support from within the community is awesome, but no one should expect to fund their novel from that alone. We’re just not there yet. If we want to get there, we have to contribute by helping build the reader base. Sure, most of your readers aren’t gonna stick around and buy more books on the site, but a small percentage might, and when all of those small percentages combine, it starts to add up. It’s slow, but it is happening. 

        Re: Reader royalties - The original idea for Inkshares was that readers would get a share of the profits (hence the "shares" part of the name). However, they hit a legal roadblock and had to move away from that. 

        Re: Dollars vs Readers - When Inkshares first launched, they did use dollar goals. I’m not sure what their reasoning was, but I’m happy that they changed it because A) Using dollar goals allowed the site to be used and seen as more of a vanity press, and B) Using reader goals is a much better test of how well a book will do once published. 

        Re: Accounts that can’t be followed - Great idea! I think a lot of supporters would appreciate that. I’ve seen some "private" user accounts before, so I think it is already possible to do this, however too few people know that it’s an option.


        Final Thoughts: We’re getting there, but it’s very slow going - and for good reason. Influencing an audience to buy is no easy task. This is a young company with a small staff, and it’s extremely impressive to see what they’ve accomplished so far. They’re working towards the goal that we all want to see, but it’s not a goal that can be accomplished overnight. We can contribute by bringing in new readers and building platforms that contribute to a positive reputation offsite. 

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          Yeah, @johnsoncm , It’s crowd funding. Before you crowd fund, you’ve got to have your own platform and do your own legwork. 70% of your book funding needs to come from your own resources easily right now. 

          I know it’s the harsh truth, what @Ricardo Henriquez is saying has merit. 

          As part of what you are doing in crowd funding is selling yourself and practicing your self promotion skills. 

          Syndicate backing isn’t a matter, or a metric, of if a book will sell or not. That’s more a matter of community engagement. Authors who are helpful to the community, will be picked up by Syndicates more than anything else.

          Which, does increase the chance the book will fund. But you’ve still gotta bring your own readers to the table. 

          There just simply aren’t enough authors to reliably fund a book from someone else on the website. I could go further into some tactics and some math behind stuff. 

          One thing to do: Is recruit people who want to support as readers, to join syndicates. Although that’s a hard sell because basically you are paying a lot of money for years before you get a product. 

          However just so you know: Inkshares Nirvana moment is when they have enough readers on the site where it’s easier to fund, and they are indeed working on that behind the scenes. It’s just going to take years for that kind of traction to build up. 

          They do, however, come. I’ve got 5 people who are just avid readers that stalk a lot of books on here. I brought them to Inkshares with me. Now imagine if every other author had 1-2. 

          Eventually...
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            I think that something you have to take into consideration is that inkshares is a crowdfunding platform, which means you are in charge of bringing enough readers so your project succeeds. The idea of being salesmen selling to other salesmen come from the mistaken perception that the way to funding is from selling within Inkshares. Inkshares is too young for that. The bulk of your sales have to come from people you know and their extended networks.

            Readers will come. Once the books they are publishing start picking up steam and inkshares’ authors build a readership beyond those who helped them fund, people will come, but we are some time away from that still. AS of now, it is on you to find the people in the real world that will come here and purchase your book. Very few of those will stick around and support other authors. It is what it is right now.

            I believe the strategy Inkshares is utilizing is the right one. I know they are aware that most of the burden for funding is on the author right now and they want to help reduce that burden. I doubt a form to do that will be giving a % to a reader. I certainly wouldn’t use the platform if that was the case.

            PS: I am fan of your book. Bought it early on. I hope you fund because I want to read it.
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              Robert Batten liked an update for Reflection

              Hey everyone! I wanted to send out an update and apologize for said lack of updates etc. My full-time job has me on an overnight shift that has played havoc with my sleep and my health. But there is a silver lining! I had a meeting with my manager and within the next 30 days I will return to a day shift! Woohoo! Until then I will try to get a bit more updated but it may be slow going. Just wanted to keep you all in the loop. Thanks for not giving up on me!

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                Robert Batten liked an update for Beyond The Code

                Greetings wonderful people! Long time no update.

                Yes I’m still technically alive.No I haven’t fallen into some kind of crazy worm hole. I’ve just been editing up a storm. Busy busy busy! And now I think I’ve done all I can. Now I need your help. I want to get some beta readers to help really make this book shine. If you want to put your input into Beyond the Codes final product drop me a line with any of the following

                Email: Kelsey31@hotmail.com

                Twitter: BTCInkshares

                Or direct message on Inkshares or Facebook. 

                In other news I was recently interviewed by Elan Samuel with the Warbler. Check it out. 

                 http://www.thewarblerbooks.com/featured-author-kelsey-rae-barthel/

                Thanks so much for following my story and my dream this far. I hope I can soon give you all a date for the final product. Exciting!! 

                Have a great weekend and I hope to hear from you. 

                Kelsey Rae Barthel

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                  Robert Batten liked the forum thread, Invisible comments
                  I’ve had this same problem with Tantalus Depths. Someone added several comments to my sample chapter not long ago, but when I popped in to read them, they didn’t show up. The person’s likes did show up, and on her profile page, it said she’d commented as well, but the comments themselves don’t show up in the text.
                  Which made me sad, because they were quite nice comments. :/
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