Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for The Animal in Man

For the past several nights, I've been putting together my game plan. It's a sick form of procrastination from which my writer friends know I suffer: Instead of just sitting down and writing the actual story, I'll write pages and pages of outlines, timelines, character backstories, and all kinds of 'preparative' work. (Wow, that's actually a word.)


You see, so much of "The Animal in Man" has changed since I first started writing it. ...before I can pick up where I left off, I thought it would be a good idea to get my notes straight. 


But to hell with that.


For the past several nights, I've skipped the damn preparative work and just re-wrote chapter one. I only meant to tweak a sentence here or there, but I ended up tossing out and rebuilding probably 90% of the words from the ground up. No lie. The shape of the chapter is the same, you'll see, but everything changed.


And I think it's better. My god do I think it's better! I worked really hard on this first chapter. It would be an honor if you would spend a little time reading it. (Inkshares says 33 minutes...?) Please enjoy. 


CLICK HERE to go straight to Chapter One of "The Animal in Man".


And I swear my next update will be further along in time... next time. But just so you know, I will be working tirelessly every night, armed with a Jameson and Ginger Ale in one hand, a keyboard in the other. (...That makes little sense. Must be the Jameson.) Cheers!

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    Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Isolation

    Hey guys,

    I'm sorry that I haven't updated in a while. I have decided to focus my attentions to my series for right now until I can find more inspiration to finish out this story. I can still upload chapters since there's about 40 of them written already. I'm just having trouble with the last 10 fluff chapters with all of their therapies and that kind of stuff. 

    I am having someone work on the portraits for each character so that I can make Sarah's little sketch book that also holds the picture that tells of misfortune. So I am still working on other things for this book and as I get those things together I will update. 

    I am trying to keep an active Facebook page for the book, so please check it out: https://www.facebook.com/Isolation-150428755318601/?ref=hl 

    I also put up a new cover which I think is pretty cool and it's just temporary but it has the basic concept. I will be working on my artwork for this story and for my other stories as well. Please let me know what you think of the chapters and leave reviews or comments. I know it's probably terrible but this is my first time writing in this genre. 

    If you are interested in supernatural fantasy or dystopian books please consider following my other books because I am actively updating those right now. 

    Thank you!

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      Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for And the Wolf Shall Dwell

      Hi all, chapter 3 is in the air, maybe less figurative/descriptive but a dialogue that is very important in order to understand where this is going to. initially was part of chapter 2 but decided to keep chapters short and to the point (at least for now in these previews).  over the weekend will edit and upload chapter 4 which takes place in the past, and will see how to take it from there. hope u enjoy! 

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        Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Disintegration

        Hello, everyone.

        I know it's been ages since my last update. I haven't had much to say, so I've been reluctant to mince words just to send something out.

        I've been working almost every day on the manuscript and I have been giddy with excitement over how it is coalescing into exactly the story I want to tell. To all of you that have supported Disintegration so far, thank you again. That support has been the catalyst for my inspiration. However, with regard to my goals on Inkshares, I have further yet to go.

        I spoke with Jeremy about the impending end of my campaign and how, when it arrived, I would qualify for Quill ... but Disintegration will need more than a "light edit"; it needs the works. The manuscript is epic and--while it can definitely be pared down--the more eyes on it, the better; the more rounds of editing, the better; the more professional the packaging, the better.

        So, if you look at my book page, you'll notice that the Quill option has been removed. I didn't know that was going to be the result of my talks with Jeremy ... and seeing the safety net be taken away was a little frightening ... but it's just an exclamation point on that a fully funded campaign is the only way for Disintegration to truly be successful.

        Additionally, we've opted to go with a paperback, which decreases the price ... which, I hope, makes Disintegration more enticing to anyone who has yet to purchase it.

        On that note, more orders are crucial. If you have already supported me, and if that support indicates that you really believe in my book, please help me generate more sales. Share it with your sci-fi loving friends who aren't yet aware of it. Go tell it on the mountain.

        The eBook option is now only ten bucks. The paperback is $20. I'm only halfway to fully funded, so your help is critical. If you can get just one person to buy a copy -- if all of my followers do the same -- we'll be knocking on the door of that fully funded campaign tomorrow.

        Please help me to fully realize Disintegration's potential.

        Thanks,
        Steve
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          Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Exile, Magus

          Only 2 days left to hit at least 250 preorders!

          Also its Wednesday which may cause some of you to note how I missed both my Sunday and Tuesday updates.  With the deadline so quickly approaching I decided to skip those updates in favor of doubling up on pitching the book.

          We're currently at 285 followers, and 86 copies ordered by only 78 of those followers.  That means 207 of you haven't ordered yet, and if only 164 of you(roughly 3/4) did then we would be at the Quill goal.  While I'm too much of a realist to not acknowledge that its a long shot with such a small amount of time remaining, I'm also too stubborn to give up and not push for it to happen.

          With that in mind I'll point out that now is the perfect time to take the chance on Exile, Magus by going ahead and hitting that order button.  If enough of you do so, then this book will be published by Inkshares and find its way into your hands.  If not, then your money and/or credits will be refunded to you after the campaign ends so that you'd have it back in about 3 days time.  So I beg of you to order now if you haven't done so already.

          That's all I've got for today.  I will be back Saturday to for an end of funding campaign update.  As always I want to thank everyone for your support, it has been quite entirely heartwarming.  I just wish I'd been able to communicate more directly with all of you.  If any of you do want to communicate with me, then you should hit me up on Facebook and/or Twitter(@thoasoold).  In the meantime, keep reading and enjoying!

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