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Critshares is now 12 members strong! The group currently has 12 posted chapters with a total of 30 critiques between them. 

I want to thank our founding group members:
@Robert Batten  @alex maher  @Sam Fellows  @Matthew Adams  @Jessica S. Carter  @Jacob Zoller  @Henry Jakubs  @Heidi Rebstock  @J. Graham-Jones  @Mark A. Mix  @Cem Bilici 

Each new member who has posted chapters has received several detailed and thorough critiques from the Scribophile community (most within 2 days of posting). I’m sure they’d agree that this feedback is already helping them improve their current Inkshares projects, and their writing overall. 

The bonus Karma has been claimed, but we’re always accepting new members. So if you’re looking for honest feedback, or know an Inkshares author who is, come join the fun or send them our way.  

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Thanks so much for your interest. 

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    Hi guys, 

    Questions like that of Kim’s, is something I get on a weekly basis, and other authors too. I want to give the same advice I gave @A. White who reached out to me, and explain what took me a good month and a half of campaigning, and a lot of conversations with other authors, as well as Jeremy the former CEO, to learn.

    I’ve honestly tried every strategy on the face of the planet trying to raise orders, many of my strategies failed, but eventually some succeeded. Here’s what I’ve learned, take some of it or not at all, at your own discretion.  I’ll also repeat stuff that excellent campaigners and authors such as @Tal M. Klein and @Ricardo Henriquez said in older threads - I don’t have the links but it’s worth searching for their posts, they taught me a lot.

    I won’t survey the tactics that failed for me such as book stores and book clubs, as they did work for others. So I’d encourage you to think outside the box no matter what. 
    First of all, Facebook and Twitter should be considered with a touch of scepticism, IMHO. While they are imperative to make sure people you know hear about your book, the chances of converting "likes" & "RT"s to actual orders are very slim. 

    These are the most useful tactics I did manage to work with.

    (1) Actual Social Networks - not just your own! Ricardo said wisely that you are selling yourself and not your book. What’s 10$ for family and friends to support YOU ??
    My wife & mine social network alone banked about 150 orders, and yes that meant nagging people on WhatsApp numerous times, and emailing the world (I found that a bulk email gets dumped by 8/10 people while personal email gets dumped by few). Don’t be shy of reaching out to old college buddies. Nobody is off the list - was what we said - unless they had a recent misfortune or death in the family. 

    Then move on to friends and family friends’ social networks. Write them a generic email that will support yourself and your cause. Pledge a sum of the orders to charity if you think that may tip the scale for people who don’t really know you.
    My top referrer in this campaign is my 70 year old  aunt - she sent an email I’ve written for her to all her friends, which incidentally are not poor and are readers, that alone banked about 55 orders! top referrer.

    (2) Reach out for Inkshares authors - ask for their orders, whether with credits they have or actual money. If people are active and like your work - they’ll order. But the bulk of orders won’t be them, and you need to give people here time. I have a day-job and two kids ages 10 month and 2.5years - do u honestly think I can read every book I am being sent on the spot. I do listen and try my best to read books of anyone who reached out to me or DM’ed me, eventually. 

    (3) Support fellow authors - Find an author who’s in same stages of the campaign as you and preferably same genre. Compare notes. Maybe he’ll have a few friends that will look into your book - worth asking. I know some people here don’t like it when authors ask their base to order another author’s book and vice versa, but if the genres match and people aren’t held back to keep bugging their crowds with requests, this can be legitimate to a small scale.
    In all honesty, I doubt more than a handful of people would allow you to bug them to order multiple books, so nurture these gems that do and make sure you choose wisely.
    I have a friend that asked me to explain to him how to stop Inkshares emails, and another who told me, after ordering my book, that he was at a point where he’d do just about anything to stop getting my texts. message conveyed? Nag nag nag.

    (4) Landing page -  I found this landing page I did useful.  This was advise by Jeremy, who’s been following Tim Farris, a Kickstarter guru. Look, it won’t bring orders but it’s a nice gimmick.
    here’s my example: http://www.jondbooks.com/final-stretch.htm
    This is a good time to say that a website is pretty imperative, IMO.

    (5) Create a buzz - A movie, a givaway (cups for top referrers is a concept I copied from Tal Klein but made original ones for the campaign), charity pledge, anything that will zest your campaign a bit and can create a buzz amongst your friends. I got the marketing department in my firm to step in, especially when they heard about my charity pledge. They sent a pitch about my book in the company newsletter and portal. OK true, this banked ’only’ about 40-50 orders from a company of 4,700 people (percentage-wise it’s not impressive), and not everyone is working in a big firm, but I am sure colleagues would help. Buy them a beer as a reward, or go on a coffee run (I only bought 5 coffees so not everyone would jump on that)

    (5) Goodreads - This was probably the most unrewarding channel. I reached out to 300 people, and asked them to read my preview , bundled in PDF for their convenience http://www.jondbooks.com/download-pdf/
    remember work under the assumption that people who are not on inkshares will not click into Inkshares straight away - would you?
    Make sure the PDF has a link to preordering. Admittedly the response rate was disappointing with 40 Yes, and only 12 orders... but I got in touch with some great people.. Oh and make sure you don’t spam too much there, I got an official warning from them at the time :-)

    A couple of notes:
    Thank you’s are very important. You are not J. K. Rowling. yet. if somebody ordered your book - please thank them. It will come across down to earth and very polite.
    Targets - make sure you work with targets. if you need 5 orders a day until the end - you need to know that you can rest when you hit 5, or stay up when you didn’t. The dashboard is not accurate and doesn’t know what you know and expect. Count out national holidays and days off for you, you’ll need it to keep sane and save your relationship/marriage if you are in one. But it’s important to keep track of the figures and not be left in a situation where u suddenly need 17 orders a day - much less feasible.

    These are my "words of wisdom". I hope it will help some of you. People here are great and can be very helpful, personally, while I didn’t order every book tossed my way, I made time for anyone who asked me for guidance. 

    This will be the last thread I participate in for the time being, lack of time and the urge to work on a sequel and copy edit my book are too time consuming. But feel free to email me at ydital gmail address or DM me here - I promise I’ll reply.

    remember the most important thing is not to let anyone tell you that you cannot do it. And also, if you fail - don’t miss out on the lesson - and make sure to better prepare for the next campaign.

    @Kim Whale GOOD LUCK ! 
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      As a thought, there should be a syndicate dedicated to supporting unpublished authors. Call it the first timer, newcomer, or Rites of Passage Syndicate that focuses on giving a boost to unpublished gems that have struggled to get their work out there. Thoughts?
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        Story Update:
        SCARAB is designed to provide for any need its human masters may encounter as they set up their survey mission on Tantalus 13, including their need for swift and reliable transportation. As with everything else SCARAB has built since settling on Tantalus 13, however, it has gone significantly beyond the minimum effort needed. To an almost suspicious degree...
         

        SCARAB’s craftsmanship is second to none. But why? Why is SCARAB so determined to create such extravagant accommodations for a simple mining base? How is a machine, however intelligent, capable of such artistic expression? Is SCARAB’s handiwork hiding secrets of its own?

        Find out, when you pre-order Tantalus Depths!

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          Robert Batten liked the forum thread, What am I missing?
          Also take a look at what other authors are doing with their Pre-Order Pages. I learned a lot from just snooping about on successful funds.  P.S. I followed your project!
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            Additional content superbly helps in my experience. Like artwork, book trailers, videos of any kind. It adds value to the project. This has been stressed by several who have funded already. I’ve heard you need to strike out with about 30-40 of your own network before the external orders start to trickle in. Just keep at getting your core readers committed to the project and have them share as well. 
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              Exciting news Masters and Apprentices! RUNE OF THE APPRENTICE will be made into an Audible Audiobook! 

              I can’t begin to describe how happy this makes me. I have heard so many times, "I just don’t have time to read and really wish RUNE was an audiobook!" Well, folks, your wish is my command! Inkshares has done a wonderful job of making it all happen and I am so excited hear, Aleksi, Nataraja, Domadred, Beck, and all the other exciting characters of RUNE OF THE APPRENTICE come to life! HUGE shout out to Adam Gomolin for locking the deal down. Thank you!Also, as many of you know, I just got back from The DOTA2 International Convention and Championship. TI6 was awesome!  (Congrats to team Wings on their epic victory!) As promised MONTHS ago, I ROCKED the Antimage Cosplay, mohawk and all! My brother and I had a great time and you can view the pictures directly on Instagram HERE to get captions and info about each shot! Or for those who don’t like Instagram, there is a full gallery uploaded at the end of this post.


              Lastly, for those who have not yet pre-ordered RUNE, now is the perfect time because you can get 25% off the hardcover on Amazon by clicking HERE: http://amzn.to/2aX3gWo RUNE is a great read, but don’t just take my word for it, here is what Ricardo Henriquez, author of The Catcher’s Trap had to say:
              "Jamison Stone’s novel, Rune of The Apprentice, presents the reader with a detailed and beautifully crafted new world. The descriptions of Terra’s geography and its inhabitants are so vivid that I could easily imagine myself walking through the avenues, squares, and marketplaces of Mindra’s Haven. But this book is not only about a well-crafted fantastic world. Probably one of Stone’s biggest achievements is his capacity to portrait his hero’s internal struggle. Aleksi is young, powerful and good at heart but lost. Having the reader rooting for Aleksi from beginning to end requires the work of a skillful storyteller; Jamison Stone is definitely that person." ―Ricardo Henriquez, author of The Catcher’s Trap
              If you have not taken a look at The Cateher’s Trap, then you really should--just be warned Ricardo is a master of horror and his book is truly a scary read!  All in all, I am so excited to be able to share RUNE with you all in audio form, and dressing up in full on Antimage Cosplay at TI6 was fantastic! The Dota community rocks! I am super excited for TI7! And again, for those who have not yet picked up their copy of RUNE, snag one here at Amazon for 25% off! http://amzn.to/2aX3gWoP.S. My next convention is Dragon Con which starts Sept 1st. Expect some more KILLER Cosplay pictures :) 

              To view all of the pictures on my website click HERE:  goo.gl/Y1yowU

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                Hello everyone ~ 

                Work continues on "The Children of the Forest." I wanted to take this opportunity to apologize for the extended length of silence. When I renewed my focus on this project back in February, I made the difficult decision to restructure much of the original novel. That means entire subplots, characters, and even parts of the original premise were changed drastically or removed altogether. 

                Since passing the threshold to enter into Inkshare’s Quill collection, I’ve been working nonstop on the novel, design of the book itself, and more. CotF has always been a passion project for me, and I want to make sure that when the time finally comes, and the novel is in reader’s hands that it’s as incredible as I believe the world and story is capable of being. 

                Given the extended waiting period, I’ve updated the Inkshares page with fresh versions of the novel’s opening 4 chapters. Check them out, leave feedback if you’re so inclined, and keep an eye out for more updates as we inch our way closer to the project’s completion. 


                P.S. ~

                Oh yeah, and while I’m here, enjoy a sneak-peek at the next beautiful design from my favorite artists, Ellie Yong ~ enjoy!

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