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When it comes to villains there are a few choices you have to make. Do you want your villain to be purely evil, chaos for the sake of chaos? Or is he trying to do what HE thinks is right? Is he the protagonist of his own story?

Once you have figured out what kind of villain you have, you have to give him a reason. If he just wants chaos, what’s the reason for that? If he’s more complicated and is trying to do the "right" thing, how did he arrive at that conclusion? 

Going into personality. Is he the type of person who would try to explain his side of things to get more people on his side? Or would he just coerce people to join him? When he comes to clash with the protagonist, is he going to just throw some fireballs and be done with it, or will this hurt him to do so?

There are fantastic villains who fall into each category. If you want true depth, I would look into a villain who gives you a good bit of cognitive dissonance when you look at him- Sure, he’s doing wrong, but he’s really trying to do it for a good reason. When he gets defeated he doesn’t scream "next time gadget!" and run away, he falls to the ground and cries because his dreams have fallen around him. In that way, he is never really defeated because his dreams live forever in the mind of the protagonist. And the protagonist is haunted by what he did. Yeah, he did what was right... but he could have just as easily sided with the other guy and THAT would have been "right." That’s the sympathetic villain, and he’s one of the best in my opinion.

In contrast to the sympathetic villain, there is the pure, unadulterated evil villain. This guy is just bad news all the way around. And he is going to make you regret crossing him. Why is he evil? Nobody knows. Something must have happened, but anyone who asks him about it ends up charred inside and out. Should we feel bad for him? Well, let’s wait until he finishes blowing up the puppy orphanage to ask him. The pure evil villain is also among the most badass guys out there. He crushes potential protagonists with a snap of his finger, leaving them alive to come back for another beating later. Once he is dead the protagonist gets haunted again... but this time by the people that he couldn’t save. 

I find writing up short stories helps me find what kind of bad guy I want. Just my two cents!
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    Hey, @Jordan M Tetley , you wrote: 

    " The Antagonist is one who doesn’t want a bridge. So in other words, he wasn’t to take down the Bridge who is dividing the plains. Plains being the real world and the afterlife. So I need to find a reason why he would want to do that? Like winning a loved one back, like thinking the plains should be the same thing? Can a simple idea in that retrospect work? "

    And the answer(s) is: Yes, yes, and yes!

    You answered your own question - if the Protagonist is trying to DO something - to BE the bridge, so to speak - then the antagonist needs to stop them. The story DEMANDS that there’s a force or person working against them, either directly or indirectly. They need to butt heads every now and then, or at least the Bridge/Protagonist needs to come across the villain’s "influence" in the world - some challenge for them to overcome. Ultimately, there needs to be a showdown of their ideals at the end - the climax - from which only one of them will walk away.

    So, yes, FIND A REASON for the villain to oppose the hero, and you’re set. Now, it can’t just be a mustache-twirler "I’m evil just because" kind of character. Those are very, very boring. The reason the bad guy does what he does has to be something readers can identify with - we don’t necessarily have to agree with it - but on a deep level we can relate to it, we can in some small way see ourselves wanting to do the same thing if we were in his/her situation.

    For my own book "The Animal in Man" - I actually designed the villain first. (And give him a frikkin cool name - Salastragore - which I’m kinda proud of...!) My whole story started as a D&D campaign a loooooong time ago, so I didn’t even know who the Player-characters would be, but I KNEW already who they would be fighting against. I had his whole backstory, and all his plans were sewn into the campaign, so no matter who my players chose to play, they would be encountering either him, his agents, or his influence throughout their story. That’s just how my story took shape, kind of backwards, by designing the world and the villain first. Most stories, I’d wager, start on the ’right’ foot and think in terms of who the hero is, and how they’re going to leave their footprint on the world as they move through it.
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      @Jordan M Tetley Death (a character) would be more of an anti-hero, because your protagonist knows of the afterlife, so death isn’t necessarily a bad thing to her. The antagonist’s motive could be the same as Satan, where they just want to mess things up for whatever the force of good is, because they want to be the one in charge
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        @Jordan M Tetley I saw that your book is up for preorders, good luck and I’m not sure if you still need help but here’s some things I use for my villains.

         Think of something that scares you and make that character the embodiment of that fear

        Think of what your protagonist fears and think of that

        Not all villains are characters. Think of a conflict, not every story has a particular villain, but all the ones I know of have a conflict. Possibly a force of nature, bad situation,  basically a barrier between them and their goals.

        If your villain is a character make them multi-dimensional. Most people sincerely believe what they are doing is the right thing to do. They likely view your protagonist as their villain, and villains aren’t usually only up to being villainous (a good villain can be anything depending on the story. Judging by yours think of using death itself as a villain)

        I hope this helps anyone that reads this, let me know if I missed anything because a big part of my stories are the villains. 

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          I pretty much entirely agree with @Joseph Asphahani Other than having a pretty awesome name(AmIright?), but he pretty much hit the nail on the head. The perfect villain is just as likeable/relate-able as your main characters. The best villains ever are the ones you "Love to Hate."

          I won’t elaborate, since Joseph pretty much said everything I would say on the matter, but I’ll provide some examples. 

          If you ever watched the Starz series of Spartacus(it’s my favorite show ever), the blood, sex and violence is a bit over the top but if you dig deeper it has one of the greatest written scripts of all time. The dialogue used on the show is in a Shakespearean style which helps but what makes it so good is the villains are just as likeable as the heroes. You can see where Spartacus, Crixus and Gannicus are coming from but you can also see where Batiatus, Marcus Crassus and Caesar are coming from too.

          ^That’s a pretty obscure example, I know. But let’s do a more known one.

          Batman vs. The Joker. I know, I know... There’s so many stories about the two but the best ones happen to be the ones where The Joker points out the fact that Batman is literally one bad day away(Sorry, just watched "The Killing Joke.") from becoming The Joker. Batman is the hero, but The Joker exists SOLELY to mess with Batman to the point that Batman becomes just as messed up and deranged as him. In most stories it doesn’t work, but they exist to move each other in their "destined"/written path.  Batman needs The Joker and The Joker needs Batman. The plot needs both. The writer needs both. Ultimately, the reader needs both.

          The best Hero/Villain relationships involve them driving each other in the direction they need to take.
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            Hey there! So I didn’t even know a place like this existed until the G&S fantasy contest started. I’m so into it, though! I still feel like I’m fumbling in the dark when it comes to diving into the community here, though. Not sure if there’s any tips or tricks to get to know folks around here. I’m always interested in getting to know other writers- trading stories/success/frustrations/etc. 

            So basically I just wanted to say hi! And see if there’s anywhere in particular I should start in order to shake the new kid feeling. 
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              Hello Allison, 
              I am in the same boat. There seems like there are lots of tools available but like you I was hoping for a bit of direction. Floundering like a fish out of water is a feeling I dislike. 

              The chance to chat with other writers and read some great stuff certainly helps to alleviate the discomfort though!
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                Welcome to the party! Here are a bunch of Inkshares related resources that helped me get oriented and keep me in ’the know’. 

                Inkshares Goodreads Group
                https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/171196-inkshares-community
                You can introduce yourself and promote your book. Good place to start. Tons of educational stuff there. 

                Drinkshares Live Stream
                https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRXSeK2451o1DpjwVbr52Cw
                Bi-weekly live stream on YouTube hosted by Inkshares authors. They have a different topic every time. You can chat live and ask the hosts questions.  It’s really fun. 

                Write Brain Podcast
                http://www.jfdubeau.com/writebrain/
                Hosted by J.F. Dubeau (God in the Shed) and Paul Inman (Ageless). They discuss all manner of things related to Inkshares. I’ve learned quite a bit from listening to this and the archives. Valuable, insightful stuff. 

                Critshares: Inkshares Authors Critique Group
                https://www.inkshares.com/forum_threads/looking-for-feedback-join-critshares-
                New group for Inkshares authors looking for feedback on their work.  I run this...so I’m not biased or anything. 

                The Warbler
                http://www.thewarblerbooks.com/
                Elan Samuel has a great blog where he reviews Inkshares books. 

                Inkshares Reddit
                https://www.reddit.com/r/inkshares/

                Hope that helps!
                @Allison Griner  @Robert Hunter 

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