Noah Broyles liked an update for Tantalus Depths

Greetings friends and supporters. We’re certainly due for an update on the state of Tantalus Depths, and I am thrilled to say this update is a really good one.

About a week ago, I received my first round of copyedit notes for Tantalus Depths. They were wonderfully thorough and picked up a ton of minor punctuation and grammar errors that managed to elude my notice through more than a dozen full readthroughs. They were easily fixed, and the book feels much cleaner for it. 

You’ll remember that the development editing process took almost two years to complete, due to extensive rewrites and passing through multiple draft stages. Copyedits, I am happy to say, are much simpler and more straightforward, and mostly just involve clicking "accept" on every grammar change my copyeditor suggested. I made sure to read each sentence in context to ensure that none of the suggestions accidentally changed the meaning of the sentence, and I caught a couple that would have done so, but even with that close attention to detail, I am proud to say that it still only took me a few hours to make every single change expected of me for this stage of the process. While it took me months to get through a round of development edits, I was able to finish all my copyedit notes and send them back to my publisher in less than a week.

This very well may be the first time in our five-year development process where we’ve actually been ahead of schedule, and we are rapidly nearing the end. My copyeditor will go over the changes I’ve made, and barring one or two more potential correspondences to correct a few outstanding issues, we will soon be done with the copyediting process and be ready to move on to the proofreader. After that, Tantalus Depths will at long last be completely finalized and ready for its release.

It’s been a long road to get here, friends, but we are rapidly gaining momentum in the last stretch before the finish line. Expect some very exciting announcements in the next few months, including a cover reveal and our long-awaited official release date.

I never thought it would take this long to get this book into your hands, and I do hope future projects will move more smoothly now that I know what to expect. But I can definitely say with confidence that the book is ten times better now than it was before this process began, and I could not be more excited to see what happens when my world finally enters yours.

Stay tuned, my friends, and watch the skies.

The Void is calling...

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    Noah Broyles liked an update for The Man from Mittelwerk

    I’ve been remiss in sending out updates as we worked on yet-another draft. But now, some news: The Man from Mittelwerk is finished (huzzah!) and slated for publication in the first half of 2022.

    It only took three years, 13 drafts and several major rewrites. Nonetheless, the book went through final copyediting (2,600 changes, ulp!) which called out innumerable grammar and consistency issues. The editor also helped us strengthen the emotional impact in key scenes.  

    It took several late nights of bleary-eyed Track Changes editing to work through the easy edits. Then I passed it to my brother and co-author to deal with the harder issues, while I was out cycling in the rain for a week. He got through it, undid many of my changes, and handed it back to me. I undid only a few of his changes, finished some items he didn’t want to touch and voila, a finished manuscript. 

    The next step is for the text to be laid out in a proper design, followed by a final round of proofreading and getting a cover designed. Since we’re done with the writing, I built a web site with some mocked-up covers, created in homage to a few authors you might know.

    I’m really proud of the what we’ve written. It’s been a lengthy process, but the book is all the better for all the revisions. I shared a copy with another tech industry author, Eric Maikranz and he said:

    “The Man from Mittelwerk is a mind-bending thriller that will keep you turning pages.”
    – D. Eric Maikranz, author of The Reincarnationist Papers

    So not too shabby.

    If you haven’t read Eric’s book I highly recommend it. It’s a fascinating exploration of reincarnation and what happens if you remember your past lives. His book was the basis for the Mark Wahlberg time-travel CGI extravaganza Infinity. (Spoiler alert: The book is better!)

    As always, thank you for your support of this long-suffering project. Let me know what you think of the fake covers below, what you’re reading and how you survived quarantine. But don’t hit reply to this email. Instead email me at ZUrlocker@hotmail.com.

    Cheers!
    --Zack

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      Noah Broyles liked an update for Bane of All Things

      CANCER UPDATE, OCT. 07, ‘21

      Good day, everyone. Yesterday, I returned home from a surgery to remove the Melanoma tumor from my head. Surgery went well and the prognosis is good. Now, I face a couple of months of recovery at home and treatments with radiation and immunotherapy.

      Bottom line: This is the first day of the rest of my life, and life is good.

      The dark irony in all this is that my two main characters, Ryn and Josalind, each have “demons” of a sort in their heads. And it turned out that I did, too. But different than them, I can say at this stage that mine is easier to excise.

      Thank you for all your support and good wishes.

      Cheers

      Leo

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        Noah Broyles sent an update for The House of Dust

        The House of Dust publishes today!

        Supply-chain woes mean it’s displaying as "in stock soon" on many retail sites instead of "available now." So copies from Amazon, B&N, et cetera will arrive a little late. However, we do have copies in stock at Inkshares, so placing an order here would mean it’s shipped right away...

        To anyone who’s already read, THANK YOU! Share your thoughts on Amazon, B&N, Goodreads, or wherever. You always here authors say it, and I’ll say it too: reviews really do help. 

        And thank you to everyone who followed the project on its long journey to today.

        Noah

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          Noah Broyles liked an update for THE GHOST TRACKS

           PLEASE UPDATE YOUR ADDRESS TO ENSURE BOOK DELIVERY

          Hey everyone. A quick update on THE GHOST TRACKS. The release date has been pushed back one week, to October 26th.  A VERY important note. If you ordered a physical book from Inkshares, and have since moved, please update your address on the Inkshares website. Otherwise, your book will be sent to the old address on file.

          To update your address, sign into your Inkshares account. Then click the circle icon on upper right corner of the screen. In the dropdown menu, select  "Shipping Address." From there, click the "Change Address" box and input your current one.

          Also excited to announce that there will be an audiobook version of THE GHOST TRACKS, produced by Audible Studios. We recently cast the actor who will be narrating the book, and the recording should be completed soon. I’ll be sure to send out an update once the pre-order page is live on Audible.

          Thanks again for all of your patience and support!

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            Noah Broyles liked an update for Going, Going, Gone!

            Four Months To Publication of Going, Going, Gone!

            January 25, 2022!


            The Inkshares team is doing a fantastic job designing, copy editing, and proofreading. We should have a book cover soon.

            Please notify your baseball-loving friends that that they should pre-order three or four copies of the most exciting baseball novel ever, Going, Going, Gone! and give them out to their baseball-loving friends as a 2022 spring training gift. 

            Feel free to contact me with any questions: stevehermanos@yahoo.com.

            I’m liking your home run trot!

            Steve

            Steve Hermanos
            www.stevehermanos.com
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              Noah Broyles liked an update for Bane of All Things

              CANCER UPDATE AND PENDING SURGERY

              As most of you know, I have been living with metastasized melanoma for almost two years. Since my second surgery in March 2020 to remove affected lymph nodes under my left arm, I appear to have been cancer free. To remain that way, I underwent a year of targeted gene therapy that ended in May of this year.

              I now have periodic CT scans and brain MRIs. My last brain MRI seven months ago was clear. But since then, I have developed a tumor in my brain that would suggest the gene therapy was a failure. Plan B now will be to remove all evidence of this growth with a combination of surgery and perhaps radiation and then proceed with immunotherapy.

              The kicker in all this is that I was on the gurney with the surgeon outside the operating room, ready to go under the knife, on Thursday afternoon this past week. Then word came down that a shortage of post-op recovery beds meant they had to bump my surgery. Because of other scheduling issues, I am still waiting to confirm a new date this coming week. In the meantime, all I can do is manage symptoms with medication.

              It’s a tough time all around with scheduling in hospitals with all the pressures that are on the healthcare system because of COVID (I have zero sympathy and zero patience for anyone who refuses to get vaccinated without a legitimate medical reason, but that’s another story). I live in Canada with a public healthcare system and the there are still dire challenges right now.

              All we can do is just wait and see and hopefully I will get a new surgery date confirmed on Monday and then take it from there.  

              TREATMENT OPTIONS

              Where gene therapy tries to attack the cancer directly, immunotherapy boosts your own immune system’s ability to identify, target and destroy cancer itself. So, you could say my first treatment with gene therapy was giving a man a fish to eat, and Plan B with the immunotherapy will be teaching him to fish for himself. 

              THE GOOD NEWS

              The good news is that the tumor is easily accessed and easily removed … relatively speaking. There are of course risks with any kind of surgery like this, but I am assured in this case that a positive outcome is the most likely outcome.

              AND … Bane of All Things is still releasing, come hell or high water!

              Again, due to COVID disruptions (this time, impacting book publishing supply chains) the release date has shifted back three weeks to Dec. 07 – but it will still be out in time for Christmas, so chill that egg nog!

              Thanks again for all your love and support.

              Cheers
              Leo

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                Noah Broyles liked an update for Cat’s Paw

                Dear readers,

                I hope you have not forgotten me. It has been quite a while, and I admit that things have progressed far slower than I’d hoped. I feel that much of that is my own fault, and that has made me reluctant to post any updates. However, it looks like we’re finally over the slump, and have something real to report.

                The book went into copy edits just last month, and should be moving on to the next step within the next week or so. Apparently we have a publication date set for February 2022, so here’s hoping things go according to schedule.

                As I’m writing this, the International Agatha Christie Festival is just entering its last day. I was invited to say a little something about Christie’s post-WW1 world, though the ongoing plague means my contribution has had to be online only. Rather a shame not to be there in person, but being "online only" means the video is now available on YouTube. Check it out here: Agatha Christie: Clues to the Post-War World. While you’re there, why not check out some of the other online talks and events for the festival?

                Cheers to everyone; stay healthy, and happy reading.

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                  Noah Broyles sent an update for The House of Dust

                  Friends:

                  I’ve never sent an update for this project. But that doesn’t mean that nothing noteworthy has happened. In fact, everything has happened. The House of Dust will be published in two weeks, on Tuesday, October 5. 

                  This story landed on Inkshares after I picked up a copy of Tom Merritt’s novel Pilot X at my local Barnes & Noble and read the "about the publisher" section. That was January 5, 2018 (I still have the receipt). House of Dust was only a half finished first draft at the time, but I figured it wouldn’t hurt to upload a small portion and see if it caught any eyes. About 11 months later, in December of 2018, Adam Gomolin (CEO, editor) reached out of the blue to say he’d come across the novel while clicking through story machine. He was interested in seeing more. So I sent more. 

                  The book was officially acquired under the 2018 Horror Manuscript Contest. And now, about three years later, after draft upon draft, it is ready for you.

                  Since the book never went through a funding campaign, not many of you here on Inkshares have pre-ordered. But many of you were kind enough to follow the project. Several of you left comments of encouragement. All of it is appreciated. Before joining Inkshares, writing had been a solitary labor. The company of others made it easier to carry on. And now, here we are...

                  If you’re hungry for a strange, twisted Southern gothic tale, a pre-order now means that apatite will be filled in a few weeks. Barnes & Noble, Amazon, or of course right here on Inkshares. Click over at least to look at the amazing cover art. Trust me, the inside of the book is just as beautifully designed. 

                  Thanks again to all of you.


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