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Aldo Salt commented on Moonflowers
Fair point: I can’t exactly poo-poo a "Hidden Magic Village" setting, given that my own "Cold Iron Crossing" book is built around the exact concept. 

And now I’m imagine The Tagalong Pantheon flailing their arms around like Kermit the Frog :)

Edit:

Out of curiosity, what drew you to Irish Folklore and the Tuatha De Danaan as central themes for the first 75% of your story?

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    Aldo Salt commented on Cold Iron Crossing
    Revision Note #3: Following in the Footsteps of Giants

    Full disclosure: I’m a white guy who’s writing and revising a novel featuring an Asian-American protagonist (inspired very heavily by a certain co-worker who likes to talk like a grizzled Gumshoe). As a writer drawing on elements of a culture and heritage not his own, it’s doubly important for me to avoid stereotyping, seriously engage with perspectives of Thai-American folk, and above all, make "Cold Iron Crossing" a damn good yarn.

    I also want to give a big shout-out to some of the many talented Asian  authors out there, pumping out out brilliant fantasy stories that blow mine out of the water!

    –JY Yang, the Tensorate Series: https://jyyang.com/the-tensorate-series/

    –Benjanun Sriduangkaew, "Scalebright" and "Winterglass": https://beekian.wordpress.com

    –Ken Liu, "The Dandelion Dynasty" series: https://kenliu.name

    –Fonda Lee, "Jade City" and "Zero Boxer: http://fondalee.comhttp://fondalee.com

    –RF Kuang, "The Poppy War": https://rfkuang.com/books/

    –S.P Somtow, "Vampire Junction": http://www.somtow.com

    –Jamie, Legapsi, "Moonflowers": https://www.inkshares.com/books/moonflowers

    If you like Cold Iron Crossing, you’ll definitively love these works!
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      Aldo Salt commented on Moonflowers
      Wow! You have a really clear picture of the kind of story you want to write,  and you’ve tied it in beautiful with the tragic epic of Philippine colonization and resistance.

      You also raised a very good point about how the "Harry Potter" concept of magical people hiding themselves from the ’mundane world’ is a false narrative––that in fact, practitioners all across the world play a public, productive role in their cultures and communities.

      Your story could go in any direction depending on how your characters act, think and evolve over time. But I can’t resist asking: how do you think the Philippines will change when Alima brings the magic back?



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        Aldo Salt commented on Moonflowers
        That’s both a dark and interesting plot element: I’m imagining a ’war of traditions’ where western Hermetics clash against Philippine ’Kulam’ practitioners in the shadow of Spanish Colonialism, culminating in a ceremonial ritual that seals away the potency of Philippine magic.

        On a related note, have you ever read this Philippine urban fantasy comic series?

        http://tresekomix.blogspot.com
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          Aldo Salt commented on Moonflowers
          Hah! Good point! Worldbuilding and setting bibles are sort of the potato chips of writing!

          Out of curiosity, what exactly drove Filipino magic out of the world of your story? The Spanish conquest?
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            Aldo Salt commented on Moonflowers
            When I started reading through the chapters to "Moonflowers", I got an odd sense of deja-vu. Somewhere, someplace, I’d seen this story...

            ...and then I realized I’d heard about "Moonflowers" before on Tv Tropes! I’d thought the tale of humans, faeries, primal gods and cunning folk sounded awesome. Reading it in person, I’m blown away by the tight prose, dialogue and engaging characters!

            I find it interesting that you try to minimize world building and planning out the plot of "Moonflowers" ahead of time: it lends the narrative a spontaneous, realistic air and focuses the plot more on character agency. What inspired you to write "Moonflowers" in that specific way, if I might ask?
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              Aldo Salt commented on The Fairy Stepmother, Inc.
              Very interesting! I can’t wait to see what form this ’wicked fairy’ takes: will you be drawing from any special kinds of myth and folk tales outsider of the Grimm canon?
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