Oct 1, 2017

A Quick Update For Followers of “The Dark Mountain”

Massive Rewrites in Progress

After receiving my 30+ pages of feedback from CritiqueMyNovel.com, I have been hard at work raising the level of my story. If you haven’t checked it out lately, I’ve updated all of the posted chapters and touched up some of the excerpts as well. I’m not posting anymore for now, but know that every chapter is being redone. I’m even adding an entire new character, introduced in Chapter 10, that fills in much of the lore and also a gaping plot hole.

There are several ideas I’ve had for world building that I’ve been holding back on to save for the sequel. But let’s be real…I’ll probably never write the sequel. So many of the ideas/revelations I was saving are now going to be in this book instead.

Where’s My Book?

So, as you see the book isn’t finished yet. I thought it was, but it’s not.

If you have placed an order, you will only receive a copy IF the book wins a publishing deal. And then only WHEN it is completed, edited, and printed.

If it does not win then you will receive a refund via Inkshares. Contact hello@inkshares.com if you have any issues/concerns.

About the Contest

It ends Oct 31st. So only 1 month to go.

I’m planning one last push for orders this month. I have been writing instead of campaigning because I needed to.

I know it’s cliché to say, but: If every follower ordered now, we would be in the Top 3!

So what are you waiting for?!

P.S. I posted an article on my blog here if you’re interested...