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What Others Are Saying (actually)

Here’s what some of those same guinea pigs are saying about Where the Sun Sets:

"Just opened it, and loved the first quote already." (Admittedly, the first line is only five words long.)

"I didn’t have a good day at work yesterday and I found myself reading your story in a corner to get away, it’s great so far! Bay always hated seeing anyone cry. It always made her cry a thousand times harder. She has a special kind of beauty of the soul. The rare kind that absorbs pain from others and grants them relief and freedom in turn, but she suffers for it. I don’t know why, I teared up when I read this :)"

"It’s a great premise with a lot of beautiful imagery. Super high concept and would actually make for a pretty killer screenplay/film."

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