Discussion Sign in to Comment Eddy L. Barrows · Author · added 2 months ago What I’ve read so far is a great first draft. I can clearly tell you know how to polish your work. You have a voice. I’m anxious for more. Leo Valiquette · Author · added 8 months ago I concur. This a great start with a strong voice and crisp prose that flows well.. Christopher Huang · Author · edited 8 months ago · 1 like Great opening! I’m impressed by the setup, and the "Southern Gothic" magazine felt like a real thing. I like the tone and the characterisation too, and I’m looking forward to seeing this story in its entirety. Noah Broyles · Author · added over 1 year ago All currently posted content is first draft material. Expect some typos, repeated words, etc. All thoughts welcome and appreciated.