Sub-Illusions Presents: Lucifer’s Redemption Written by: Anthony K Savage

Part1:

The Fall.

Page1 -5 Panels

Panel 1: An older man in a suit sits in a dark lit room. he is resting his hands on his cane.( Old Lucifer)

Old Lucifer: “Well hello there. Welcome."

Panel 2: View is Same as panel 1, but closer view.

Old Lucifer: “Usually when most visit me it’s not a good thing. For them, that is."

Panel 3: Close up of Old man Lucifer’s smiling face.

Old Lucifer: “But you’re not here for that, are you?"

Panel 4: Profile view of Old Lucifer

Lucifer: “While I have your attention, how about you humor an old man, and let me tell you a story."

Panel 5: Close up of Old Lucifer’s eyes.

Lucifer: “Arguably ONE of the greatest stories ever told

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Panel 1: Wide angle view of sun, or rays of light taking up a good portion of the panel. there are clouds at the bottom of the panel, Angels are flying to and from like a Heavenly Highway.

Caption: Before Alpha, and after Omega

Panel 2: Slight birds eye close up view of Lucifer flying.

Panel 3: Worms eye view of Lucifer landing.

Panel 4: Lucifer kneels before the throne of the Creator. (All that can be seen of the Creator, is the light emanating from the throne.)

Lucifer: “You have called for me my Creator?"

The Creator: "My son the Light bringer. What do you think of all I have created?"

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Panel 1: Close up of Lucifer with a look of shock on his face.

Lucifer: “of course all you have created is wonderouse, and marvelouse!"

The Creator: “You are of our will, and think only as we do."

Panel 2: Lucifer has a puzzled look on his face.

Lucifer: "As you have created me."

Panel 3: Lucifer has a bewildered look on his face as he stands in the foreground. In the background is a view of Heaven with the light of the sun shining through.

Creator: “You will now think on youre own, and tell me what you alone think."

Panel 4: Mid shot close up of Lucifer. He has a look of pure surprise on his face, as he recieves the gift of free will for the first time ever.

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Panel 1 :( Largest panel) Close up profile of Lucifer.

Lucifer: “I now more than ever know that all you have created is glorious!"

Panel 2: With a Slight bird’s eye view of Lucifer.

The Creator: “Do you think your siblings would see things as you do?"

Panel 3: the panel is split with a group of angels on both sides gearing up for war.

The Creator: “If given the gift of free will, would they not be forever divided?"

Panel 4: One group of Angels

The Creator: “Those who believe as you."

Panel 5 : Opposing group of Angels

The Creator: “and those who don't"

Panel 6: Slight worms eye view of Lucifer.

Lucifer: “My great Creator they surely would see things as I do."

Creator: “then we shall see. As my light bringer, and great temter. I task you to aproach you siblings, and pose the same question to them, and see how they respond."

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Panel 1: Lucifer is in the background. A fellow Angel is in the foreground walking towards the camera, with a look of annoyance on their face.

Lucifer: "Can you not think for yourself !"

Angel: " Be careful brother. Your words are Blasphemous."

Panel 2 this is a Over the should view of Lucifer in the foreground with his back facing the camera. A different Angel is in the background with the same look of surprise Lucifer had on his face when he received the gift of free will.

Panel 3: Angels full out fighting other angels >;;;( Biggest panel)

Narrator: Just as the Creator predicted. A civil war was sparked in heaven. Brother VS Brother, Angel VS Angel.

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Note. War in heaven battle

Panel 1: Lucifer is in the heat of battle, and has his fellow brother Angels throat in his grip.( Archangel Michael)

The Creator: “Now do you see?"

Panel 2: Slight worms eye view. Lucifer is still holding Michaels neck, but pauses when he hears the voice of The Creator.

Lucifer: “No Wait..... What, what have I done?!?"

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Splash: The Archangel Michael is in the foreground recovering from being choked out by Lucifer. Lucifer stands above him looking around at the carnage, as he watches his fellow Angels on both sides of the battle falling from the sky.

Lucifer: " How could I?!?"

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Panel 1: Slight bird’s eye view of Lucifer on his knees. His head is in his hands full of regret. His wings are spread, and the bodies of his fellow Angels surround him.

Panel 2: close up of Lucifer’s eyes full of sadness and pain.

Panel 3: Lucifer screams up the sky in agony at the lost of his siblings.

Lucifer: “Enough! You win. I'm sorry! Please let this be done!"

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Page 10 -5 panels.

Panel 1: Lucifer willingly surrenders as the opposing Angels place Lucifer in chains around his wrist, and wings.

Angel:" Oh How far you have fallen brother."

Panel 2: Lucifer has a somber look on his face as he takes in the severity of the situation.

The Creator: “My son for the role that you have played I must cast you out of this kingdom.

Panel 3: Birds eye view of Lucifer partially looking up at the sky.

The Creator: “Do not despair my son. Only you can hear what I am saying. You may never return as you are now, but may one day return greater than you once were."

Panel 4: Lucifers chains begin to glow, and tighten around his wings, and hands becoming more restrictive.

The Creator: “You will go down into the lower realms, and play the most important role in our Grand design. For there cannot be good without some working reference of evil."

Panel 5: Close up of Lucifers face with a slight look of confusion.

The Creator: “For every man, and woman must have an adversary to overcome. You and youre fellow fallen Angels shall facilitate that need."

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Panel 1: Lucifer looks up with wonder.

Lucifer: "I will serve you however you see fit my Creator."

Panel 2: Close up of Lucifer with a morose look on his face.

Lucifer: “whether it be as a bringer of light, or facilitator of that which is dark."

Panel 3: (long panel) A Profile view of Lucifer looking at his hands.

Lucifer: " I will create a kingdom that shall rival Heaven itself until I am able to return to my former glory."

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Panel 1: Mid shot of Lucifer with his back to the cameras he looks back over his shoulder.

Panel 2: Edge of Heaven shot of the abyss the Angels will be cast into

The Creator: " take your fallen brethren and test mans resilience, and faith. Show them the true meaning of my gift of free will."

Panel 3: Lucifer hangs his head in shame.

Lucifer: “As you wish my Creator. At least the loss of my brethren shall not be in vein."

Panel 4: This is a Slight bird’s eye view, as Marks appear on Lucifer’s face. he screams in agony as they are magically seared into his skin.

Lucifer: " Aaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!"

The Creator: “Through these marks you will be able to view the comings and goings of the upper realms, but can never return as long as they remain.

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Panel 1: Profile of Lucifer, and Michael standing face to face. Michael has a smug look on his face. Lucifer has a look of contempt for his brother on his face.

Michael: “To think you, The Creators most favorite cast down to live with the Apes."

Panel 2: Lucifer leans forward to whisper into Michael’s ear.

Lucifer: “Oh brother. Even cast down to live among the apes , you will never be half of what I am."

Panel 3: Close up of Michaels face as Lucifer still whispers in his ear. Michael has a look of surprise, and contempt on his face.

Lucifer: “Little brother!"

Panel 4: Michael shoves Lucifer away in anger.

Michael: “Enough! For your woeful pride you will be cast out of Heaven. So says our Creator!"

Panel 5: Michael again, with a smug smile.

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Splash: Full page splash of Lucifer and the remaining Angels being cast out of Heaven, and falling to Earth.

Lucifer: “till next we meet. Little Brother!"

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(Note. Panels 1-5 show Lucifer falling closer, and closer to Earth. Each panel his wings begin to break apart as the chains binding them grow tighter.)

Panel 6: Lucifer splashes down into the water.

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Panel 1: Lucifer falls deeper into the sea. Appears to be unconscious, and his hands are still bound.

Panel 2: The marks on Lucifer’s face begin to glow.

Panel 3: Lucifer’s eyes open wide as his marks glow.

Panel 4: As Lucifer’s marks glow brighter he breaks his remaining chains.

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Panel 1: Lucifer begins to swim to the surface.

Panel 2: Lucifer reaches the surface, and can see land in the distance.

Panel 3: Lucifer crawls onto the beach showing signs of exhaustion.

Panel 4: Partial Birds eye view of Lucifer still on all fours on the ground. His back is to the camera as the shadows of figures standing before him are cast in front of him,

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Panel 1: Partial worms eye view with Lucifer in the foreground with his back to the camera still , as he looks up at the group of fallen Angels looking down on him. Some have faces of anger.

Angry Angel: “All hail the Great Morning Star!"

Panel 2: The Angry Angel gets in Lucifer’s face as he berates him.

Angry Angel: "He who was heralded as our greatest! The one to aspire to! Look ,as he now crawls in the dirt!"

Panel 3: the Angel kicks sand in Lucifer’s face as Lucifer shields his eyes from the sand.

Panel 4: Lucifer is in the foreground facing the Camera with his back to the other Angels. One of the female Angels is trying to restrain the Angel that kicked the sand . Lucifer’s marks, and eyes begin to glow.

Female Angel: “Stop it!"

Panel 5: A Female Angel gets in the face of the Angel that was Berating Lucifer.

Female Angel: “He did not force our hands. he gave us free will. The Free will, to choose. This is what we chose, and now we must live with the consequences of what we chose!"

Panel 6: The female Angel continues to hold back the Berating Angel as he points at Lucifer accusingly.

Angry Angel: “He tricked us! We should kill him! If we do surely we can return to the Creators good graces!"

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Panel 1: Lucifer’s back is to the camera as a dark growth begins to emerge from where his wings once were.

Lucifer: " Kill Me!?!"

Panel 2-4: His dark demonic wings continue to emerg as his marks flow and flames begin to rise from his demonic bat like wings.

Panel 5: Lucifer grabs the Berating Angel by his throat.

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Panel 1: Lucifer’s new wings have fully emerged as he holds the offending Angel above his head by his neck.

Lucifer: " You dare challenge me!?!"

Panel 2: Close up the Offending angel. Pure fear is in his eyes as Lucifer chokes the life out of him.

Angry Angel: “Brother.... release me.... please.."

Panel 3: Close up of Lucifer’s face with an evil smile on his face.

Lucifer: “As you wish."

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Splash: Lucifer stands wings fully spread. they are covered by flames. the berateful Angel he holds above him is enveloped by fire. the other Angels look on in horror.