Update for Master and Servant

Jun 17, 2016

Hey there! Wrapping up my lunch break today by updating this draft a bit. I’ve incorporated some feedback, made some other changes, added things I hate and removed things I loved. Then said "screw it" and added back some things.

Then I got irritated at the whole affair and decided to leave it alone for a while.

Then I read it again, did some edits, and now I’m uploading it for you guys to check out! I *neeeeeeed* feedback! Please let me know your thoughts. And I truly appreciate the brave - if you don’t like something, tell me and tell me why. Thank you so much for your support and interest!

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