TCC Edwards
Interesting fantasy premise! I enjoyed the preview and can't wait to see more.
Rochelle Campbell
The opening of Kanimbla brings you right into the story. You're scared for Dale but more than a little excited as well. Going on an adventure for the King half-way around the world is a daunting feat. I can't wait to read about Dale's adventures!
Jane-Holly Meissner
Interesting take on a fantasy voyage, following the main character after he signs up for an expedition. We learn about the world as he does. Part of the Launchpad competition.
Kanimbla is a sort of story worth reading because of how great the dialogue is. As the characters follow about, the story becomes an adventure as if the reader were in it. Currently funding! Check it!