I’ve been hard at work, especially now that I got wind of the Launchpad 2016 contest. I’ve made quite a few edits to the first three chapters, nothing massive, but some of them will stand out if you somehow decide to re-read them (especially the opening paragraph of chapter one. That was a substantial change).

I’ve also uploaded chapter four, which is short and sweet. Well, no, maybe not so sweet the way I see it. Quick! Give me some feedback before my confidence drops down to a crippling level! Surely then we can make something great out of it.

Also, big shoutout to Karen Kenyon for writing my story’s first recommendation. It really brightened up my day! Thank you!

And thank you all for having decided that my story was worth supporting.

Until the next update,

Eduardo Luengo