Prologue and First Chapter:
The prologue felt unneeded but, to be fair, I'm sure we'll see why it IS needed later. There were some bits and bobs here and there; some misplaced periods and incorrect capitalizations... but who cares? That stuff will be sorted in editing!!! The bold truth here is that this is a good start to an epic story. I liked what I read. Some of the descriptions felt long winded and could use some tightening, but overall I truly think it's going to be a nice book. Looking forward to more.