Hey, friends-- I need people more qualified than me to look at this awesome draft. I absolutely LOVE it, but the concepts are more advanced than what I can adequately respond to. Can more science-oriented people than I follow it and help make it GREAT?
The Oniyum has vanished. War has come to Kabathan. A Mech pilot is sent deep into enemy territory, where all goes quickly awry and he finds himself surrounded by Elves, Wizards and the acrid stench of Magic.
With vibrant details and a rich narrative, Ben Thomas' The Cradle and the Sword is an absolute MUST for anyone who loves history and storytelling.