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Changing it to December 29th  or to the 29th of December to make it flow a little bit better. That is really the only mistake I can see. Great Job!!
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    Diana needs to stop strange dissapearances from happening with her inhereted powers. She ends up learning about her disturbing past.
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    I am in my High School, Enzie Woods High. All around me are kids, fussing about. Some run, some walk, some do a kind of jog- but not me. I cannot move in this dream. I can feel the humidity in the air. Another hot summers day, wasted in high school.

    The smell of sweat invades my nose. Across from me, a boy stares. He is calling my name- I have never seen this boy in reality, but yet he seems so familiar, a warm glow begins to form in my chest. It’s always him in my dreams, every . . .

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      I am in my High School, Enzie Woods High. All around me are kids, fussing about. Some run, some walk, some do a kind of jog- but not me. I cannot move in this dream. I can feel the humidity in the air. Another hot summers day, wasted in high school.

      The smell of sweat invades my nose. Across from me, a boy stares. He is calling my name- I have never seen this boy in reality, but yet he seems so familiar, a warm glow begins to form in my chest. It’s always him in my dreams, every . . .

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              The paved floor outside glistened from the retched rain that had somehow managed to make Lindsays bones feel damp. Her teeth chattered from the biting cold as she made her way up the cobbled walkway to her mothers house. All around her, tree’s swayed in unison causing their leaves to rustle in the wind.

             Diana, Lindsay’s beloved newborn baby, seemed to not care about the icy cold weather. She lay in Lindsays arms, fast asleep and unaware of the possible danger . . .

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                The paved floor outside glistened from the retched rain that had somehow managed to make Lindsays bones feel damp. Her teeth chattered from the biting cold as she made her way up the cobbled walkway to her mothers house. All around her, tree’s swayed in unison causing their leaves to rustle in the wind.

               Diana, Lindsay’s beloved newborn baby, seemed to not care about the icy cold weather. She lay in Lindsays arms, fast asleep and unaware of the possible danger . . .

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