Another real kid review:
My daughter read the Chapters you posted. Here is her review: I really like this book so far. The story, setting and characters are quite interesting. Also, the author, Mr. Leone, uses alot of humorous figurative language,which I really enjoy. I just finished reading Chapter Three, and I’m surprised that Milo is so scared of the bullies that he doesn’t think twice before going into the orb that is in the forest to hide until he finds out that he doesn’t know how get out...but then the orb lets him out. Why? I can’t help but to be curious... about what is gonna happen next. I really want to read more! Please finish writing the book ASAP!!! = Danika age 10
Thanks Danika! So glad you liked it.
Got my first review from a real kid yesterday! It’s from 7-year-old Sam Berg, posted by his mom and fellow Inkshares writer Melissa Berg. Getting a thumbs-up from an actual kid made me extremely happy:
;’I really liked the descriptions, I could imagine everything clearly. I especially liked the part when he gets trapped in the orb, that was my favorite part. During the flashback of the bullying scenes, I understood how Milo felt and I was worried for him. I wanted to get back to the orb, but I still wanted to learn about the backstory. I didn’t think the orb was creepy, just mysterious. I had some relief when the boys didn’t find Milo, but I was eager to find out how they all get in the orb together. I liked the bully aspect in chapter 2, and I liked when Milo got trapped in the orb in chapter 3. I can’t wait to read more!’ ;
By the way, if you haven’t already picked up a copy, check out Melissa Berg’s book ;Prophecy of the Stars;, which was one of the first books I picked up when I signed up for Inkshares. She had me at ;Game of Thrones; meets ;Lord of the Rings;.
Hi Champions!
We had a great day yesterday! For everybody who picked up a copy of CHAMPIONS OF THE THIRD PLANET, thank you so much! All the support has been mind-blowing and it’s hard to express how much I appreciate it, but I really really do.
By the way, if you’d like to hear me talk WAY too fast about my book and some of my thinking behind it -- and some talk about PARALLELS -- check me out on the Atomic Geek podcast: http://www.atomicgeekdom.com/podcasts/2016/2/16/95-christopher-leone-returns
