Maggie West Bean commented on an excerpt of A God in the Shed
Loved the very beginning. This chapter ending is superb. 
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    "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry." said the medical examiner, echoing the madman.
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    Maggie West Bean commented on an excerpt of A God in the Shed
    Did you mean littered? :-)
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      Maggie West Bean commented on an excerpt of A God in the Shed
      I think "awakened" allows this sentence to flow better. Of course there might be a reason for the chiefly British usage. If so, perhaps eliminating the "was" and simply using "woke" flows nicely. Just a thought.
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