Luke Fellner commented on Rule Britannia
Great job with your opening chapter, I love how you set the scene but don’t waste time in descriptions. My one suggestion would be to make the first sentence more of an attention grabber. It doesn’t have to be much, it could even be as simple as replacing the word small with the word modest. Just something to grab a new reader’s attention enough to keep them reading the paragraph, but the whole of the chapter is well written and kept me interested. 
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    A female airship Captain and her crew work to prevent a despotic Queen Victoria expanding her empire.
    Luke Fellner liked the forum thread, Can't seem to find my book
    Hi Everyone,

    Apologies for the confusion here. Stories are added to search when they receive two or more followers.  The rationale behind this constraint is that search functions much more efficiently when many ’test’ projects are filtered out.  

    I’m working on a feature to make these types of constraints more transparent when creating a new story.

    Hope this helps!
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      Hi Everyone,

      Apologies for the confusion here. Stories are added to search when they receive two or more followers.  The rationale behind this constraint is that search functions much more efficiently when many ’test’ projects are filtered out.  

      I’m working on a feature to make these types of constraints more transparent when creating a new story.

      Hope this helps!
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        Luke Fellner liked the forum thread, "Downloadable" Bookshelf books have no link?
        Thank you both for the quick answers. I’ll look for this to slip off my "downloadable" list and if not, contact the author to let him know.
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          Luke Fellner liked the forum thread, "Downloadable" Bookshelf books have no link?
          I have the same oddity occurring with Human Resources and The Phantom Forest, though neither of these books is actually published yet. 

          Although it’s listed as downloadable, you can see on the product page that it has a status of ’In Production’ - whereas books that are available (and so can be downloaded) have a status of ’Available Now’. 


          When a book is actually available, you should see something like this - a tab labelled ’Download’ on the product page, e.g:



          Hope that clears things up :)
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            For any who doesn’t know, @JF Dubeau  and I do a podcast called WriteBrain. It’s about writing and crowdfunded publishing, which started out following our journey through Inkshares. Check it out on iTunes or at www.jfdubeau.com/writebrain  

            Enjoy! 
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              Luke Fellner commented on The Burned
              I hope you are all doing well. Hopefully your works are going well. If you are at a difficult point or having writers block just write a sentence and then think about what logically comes next. After a little bit you should be flowing once again. If you’re still struggling after trying that advice please feel free to ask me about it. I’m happy to help anyone out! 
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                "A lot of people when they try this they kind of assume parts of it will take care of themselves. They don’t. You have to pretty much count on manually finding all 250 or 750 pre-orders, yourself, individually. And you have to work for every single one of them.” 

                CHECK OUT THE VIDEO HERE  
                (thumbnail of a crowdfunding-author badass, below)


                (https://youtu.be/lHdBelQub6E)

                Them be wise words, shared by author of Tantalus Depths, @Evan Graham. Evan managed to overcome a number of setbacks throughout his crowdfunding period, including the credit system debacle (before my time, but Evan does a good job of summarizing what went wrong ~3:00 minutes in). 

                Evan’s determination is inspirational and humbling. I continue to be blown away by how tough as nails this community is, and by how willing everyone is to share what are some of our most vulnerable moments. 

                Thank you for taking the time, Evan!

                Stay tuned to hear from @Ferd Crôtte  and @Jason Pomerance  who have stuck with this project despite a lion’s share of technical difficulties, and finally @Rick Heinz (PS - I will be in touch this week!)

                Happy it’s-almost-the-end-of-the-polar-vortex-season,

                Donna

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