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Hello Cape’s Side Bayers!

When I first started writing Cape’s Side Bay it was called The Woods or something like that, and it was a screenplay. I realized that I would never be able to raise a budget for such a film, and so I reworked it as a novel and gave it the title: Cape’s Side Bay.

I had no idea what I would do with it once it was written. I had never written a novel before. Then I was on twitter one day and saw something about a book called Abomination by Gary Whitta. I was intrigued, and so I looked for the book on Amazon, but it wasn’t there. I googled it and it took me to this site called Inkshares. I signed up, bought the book, then over the next couple of months got to know the site better and ordered some books I otherwise never would have found.

I decided in July 2015 that Inkshares would be the perfect place to publish Cape’s Side Bay.  Over the next six months I stayed onboard, writing and rewriting the manuscript, and watching other campaigns unfold on the site. What books succeeded, which didn’t (I was guilty of being gun shy on more than a few books, regrettably).  

I’m glad I dove into this wonderful world of Inkshares. I’ve come across some fantastic books, and better people. I look forward to sticking around long after my books campaign has come and gone, and the book is published (fingers crossed full-publishing).

26 days remain in this campaign. As I said before, I am exhausted, but I wouldn’t change it for anything!

I want to just send a couple notes to a few of my fellow authors on this site who have been extremely supportive and have some books you NEED to check out!

The Knightmares, by  G. A. Finocchiaro. I absolutely love this book, and think you will as well!  52 days left and almost at Quill! You don’t have to take my word for it, check out his guest post at Apotheosis Studios:  http://apotheosisstudios.com/blog/2016/8/5/the-knightmares-guest-post-by-inkshares-author-hopeful-g-a-finocchiaro

Squids In, by Matthew Poat. Yes, it’s a ridiculous premise. Yes, it’s awesome! Check this one out, and don’t be afraid of it! Squids don’t bite (not that I know of) and this one is well worth your time! 31 days left to order! Don’t wait!

SideScroller, by Andrew Fantasia. I’ve known Andrew for around 10 years, so maybe I’m a bit biased, but I’m not. This is another Video Game book, and its a doozy. Andrew’s an exceptionally talented writer, I’ve read a bunch of his other work, and he will always have my support. He has 21 days left with over 100 orders needed to hit Quill!

That’s all for me. Enjoy your day and take care!

James

https://www.inkshares.com/books/cape-s-side-bay

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    Time for my first real update of this campaign/contest.  First off the progress report.  Preorders have been going well, but unfortunately not well enough to prevent Magus from slipping out of the top 10 today.  There are still a lot of you following the project who haven’t ordered yet, so even if only even a few of you were to hit that order button we could get back into the top 10 easily enough.  Now on to other news.

    First off comes part of the reason I was originally going to wait until January to launch this campaign, that being that I am running a giveaway along with it.  Think of it as a contest if you want, but I prefer to think of it as a reward program - an extra thank you for helping me to get this book published.  Getting together the prizes is a slow process for me on account of budget concerns though, so I have not gotten everything I intended yet, though I will continue getting more throughout the campaign.

    The prizes include signed prints of art I commissioned/am commissioning for Magus, as well as some extra copies of books I originally discovered through Inkshares.  I’ll discuss the art prints below, but first the books.  I’m reaching out to the authors of the books as they become available to make sure they approve of me using their books as campaign giveaways.  So far I do have approval for one book which I had looked forward to since first spotting it here on Inkshares - "Children of the Wise Oak" by Oliver J. Tooley, which you can see a bit more about by clicking the link embedded in the title.  As new books are added to the giveaway options I’ll announce them in updates.

    Now on to the art.  Magus has an episodic structure, due to my original vision of it as serialized short stories following Pentaz as he struggles to make a life for himself.  My dream has always been for each of the 13 parts to have its own title page featuring full page art to either capture a scene, character, or idea from that part.  The cover which Magus has been sporting for the past several months is one of my favorite scenes from part 4 (Llanchland) where Buscidia prepares to defend Pentaz from an inscrutable enemy made of cogs(aside from its hair and beard of cables).  I’ve always thought of it as "Buscidia vs. the Cog Monster", and the scene was captured perfectly by the incredibly talented Lizzy Perez. 

    As much as I love that as a cover, I always knew that it wouldn’t remain there.  For the outer cover I’ve long wanted something which encompassed the entire story more fully, and a few months back I finally decided just what that would be.  The Caldus family plays a large role in Pentaz’ life, being at the center of the two of the three events which occur in Magus to shape him.  So it’s only appropriate that their family crest would serve as the symbol for the entirety of Exile, Magus.  I’ve been sitting on the reveal of that family crest for a couple of months now.  The art below was done by Rachel Donne(you can check out more of her work by clicking on her name), and her interpretation of the crest I described was even better than I imagined. 

    I have the signed prints of the Caldus family crest, and hope to have signed prints of "Buscidia vs. the Cog Monster" within the next few weeks.  As I commission new pieces I plan to also order 3 signed prints of each new piece.  If you know artists let me know and I may have some work for them.

    Finally I suppose I should cover how the rewards program will work.  Due to the limited number of rewards currently available, I’ll be running it purely as a referral rewards program.  If the book is successfully funded, then I will look to see who has referred the most people to order Magus and the top 10 will be contacted in order from 1 to 10 so they can pick their reward.  Because I want to especially show gratitude to those who have ordered themselves, any referrers who have also ordered themselves will have 3 added to their referral count before the top 10 are determined.

    If I can get together enough prizes before the campaign ends, then I’ll reveal another rewards program based on orders.  I’ll not go into specifics on that yet, since there’s no way of knowing if I’ll manage that yet.

    I have been way too long winded though, as I tend to when I sit down to write a full update.  To reiterate: I hope those of you who haven’t ordered yet will do so, a great book and some really nice looking art are waiting to be won so get to referring, and of course a huge thanks to all of you who have already ordered.  As always thanks for your time and support, and keep reading!
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      With all the madness that’s been happening over the past few days, I’m beyond thrilled to deliver some unreservedly good news.
      Heh...thrilled....
       

      Tantalus Depths has been backed by its third syndicate! Today we received the distinct honor of being chosen as the August pick for the Thriller Night Syndicate. It’s awesome to be recognized by the community yet again for Tantalus Depths’ content: this time not for theme, but for tone. Tantalus Depths is all about mystery and foreboding, peril and the struggle for survival against extremely bad odds. It’s a thriller to its core, and I sincerely hope you all find it as nail-biting and knuckle-whitening as I intended it to be!

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        I really enjoy sharing good news with you. When something happens in my campaign that gets me excited, like hitting a landmark number or getting a mention in some media source, I just want to gush about it to my supporters. You’re all like a family to me, and the roles you’ve all played in getting me this far will never be forgotten.
        Unfortunately, not all news is good news. As much as I enjoy sharing the good news, these updates should be about transparency. You deserve to know the genuine state of things, whether the news is positive or negative. Today, the news is a mixture.
        Let’s do the good news first:
         

        In light of the recent setbacks to my campaign, Inkshares has granted me an at least 30-day extension. Overall they’ve been extremely understanding and reasonable, and I really want to thank Avalon, Thad, Elena, and all the rest of Inkshares staff for working so hard and diligently to handle this problem. They’ve all been very communicative, professional, and encouraging through this process, and I don’t want their hard work to go unthanked. They genuinely seem as determined as I am to see Tantalus Depths reach the levels of success it truly deserves, and I am extremely grateful for all the hard work they’ve done behind the scenes.

        Now for the bad news.

        Tantalus Depths lost a lot more pre-orders today. A lot. All told, it looks like almost a third of my pre-orders were illegitimate ones. That’s hard for me to stomach. It’s not just hard because I’m seeing my numbers drop and realizing just how much more work I have ahead of me, it’s hard to know that what I had thought to be all genuine community support was, in fact, largely counterfeit. Whoever’s been abusing the credit system to support my book probably thought they were doing me a favor. They probably believed that by artificially raising my pre-order count with false orders, they were helping me get to my goal. I can appreciate the intent, and I can admire the initiative, but I find the methods unconscionable.

        Tantalus Depths is a fine book. I’m proud of my work, and I believe in it. I believe it to be a story worth sharing, something worthy of print on its own merits. I worked really hard to get it to the state it’s in. I’ve also worked really hard on bringing in the genuine, legitimate pre-orders that I have, and I’m proud of that hard work too. These false pre-orders, though...I’m not proud of those. I’m embarrassed to have had those in my campaign. I’m not sorry to see them gone. While it’s hard to see my pre-order count ticking backwards, I’m relieved to know that those orders I’m losing, I never really had. The ones I’ll have left at the end of the day will be the ones I worked hard for and genuinely earned. I’ve no need for manipulative tactics and exploitative methods: I have a good book to sell. When enough people have seen it, it will reach its goal, because it’s good enough to get there. I know this, my genuine supporters know this, and once this campaign is over, it’ll have been proven.

        To the person or persons who have abused this system to support my book: thank you for your interest in Tantalus Depths. I hope you’ll show that interest by purchasing a pre-order with real money, and encouraging your friends to do the same. I also hope you will stop exploiting this site. Doing so harms every book you touch, and harms the company as a whole, which harms every author who’s published with it. Do not poison the well for this community for the sake of promoting a book you like. It helps no one in the end.

        Meanwhile, I’m still plowing on with my campaign. I have no idea where I’m going to find all the rest of the pre-orders I need now, and I have no idea where I’m going to find the energy I’ll need to get through an extra 30-or-so days of this madness (I’d fully intended on going into a coma for about a week after my campaign ended), but I know I’m going to figure it out. This community is so supportive, and my friends and family have been just as supportive. One way or another, we will get there. I’m working on figuring out some more story updates I can send that won’t be spoilery so I can keep opening up the rich world of Tantalus Depths to you over the next few weeks of extra campaigning, and I’m hoping to come up with one or two more incentives. Since I have to climb back up to the 600 mark, I’m making that the goal we need to hit for me to release my video of me reading chapter 3. beyond that, who knows what’s ahead?

        We’ll find out together. Come, let’s dive into those depths...

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          Monday.



          With the first week of the contest down, I’m still in the Top Ten with 41 pre-orders. I’m thrilled, but I know I can do more. A Beast Requires received two amazing reviews, and it is now up to 19 recommendations.  I crave reviews and recommendations. They’re crack to a writer, and feed my need to ensure that everyone is laughing their asses off. 

          Good news. Laughing your ass off is an amazing weight loss program.

          Speaking of asses, my ass will never be an artist. I have created concept art for a lot of the locations in A Beast Requires, and some of them aren’t completely awful. 

           

          This is the Effenwood, because even an enchanted forest is ripe for urban renewal.

          Thank you everyone for following me, and supporting my endeavor to publish A Beast Requires, and make it into one hell of a melee weapon.

          - Jay

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            Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for She Is the End
            Dear reader, can we agree that beta readers are necessary for a book’s excellence?

            Sure! But we need rules for the process to work, sir.

            Hang on, is there a way we can bring Hamilton into this?

            Okay, so we’re doing this...



            One two three four five six seven eight nine

            It’s the Ten Beta Commandments
            It’s the Ten Beta Commandments!

            Number one:
            The challenge: invite a reaction
            If they accept, set a date for the transaction

            Number two:
            Push it back, let’s be real, you need more time
            You might lose a few but in the end it will be fine

            Number three:
            Get your words into a narrative flow
            Plot holes, clichés, confusion gotta go

            First draft, worst draft, you know it’s true
            We need beta readers to do what they do!

            Number four:
            If they’re not writers too, that’s all right
            You need your target audience to be on site

            You pick ‘em for their love of the genre or themes
            You have ‘em go in cold so their feedback’s clean

            Five!
            Send your book in the form that they prefer
            If you don’t, face the fact that they’ll defer

            Number six:
            Let it go, spend time with family and friends
            Tell ‘em where you been, promise your book is near its end

            Seven!

            Accept it all, critique and praise
            Don’t just debate and argue your case

            Number eight:

            Take your time to clarify
            You don’t have to agree, just understand (or try)

            Number nine:

            Fix your book, it was great but aim higher
            Put in all the work that it requires

            Then tell

            one two three four five six seven eight nine (maybe) ten readers:

            THANK YOU!

            ****

            A notable day is approaching: on August 18th, 2015, I discovered Inkshares and entered the first Nerdist contest. That means my one-year Inkshares anniversary is almost here!

            So, to celebrate (and give myself a deadline), I will be sending out my manuscript to beta readers on August 18th!!

            My beta readers will have four weeks to get their comments back to me. I will incorporate their input over the course of another two weeks. Then...

            Production on my book will begin!!

            FINALLY!!

            In the meantime, if you like Terry Pratchett, whimsy, or murder mysteries, order Jay Lockwood’s A Beast Requires immediately and help him win the current Geek & Sundry Fantasy contest!

            Here is my review:

            "Inkshares won’t let me recommend this more than once, which is a sad limitation when I like it at least ten times over. A Beast Requires mixes the wit of Douglas Adams and the whimsy of Jasper Fforde in a fairy tale land of forest slums, skeevy elf landlords, and murder. Every moment is layered in world building gold. If this book were food, it would be chocolate and I would eat it. (I may eat it anyway.)"

            Nom nom.


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