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Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for Crow’s Gambit

Supporters of Crow’s Gambit I really need your help.

We are still running short of Pre-Orders and it would be great if you could help spread the word to your fellow Inkshares members, Facebook friends, and Twitter contacts. I know it’s a lot to ask so I’m giving you something in return. Below is Vignette #2 code named "Churchill". This is a snapshot into the occurrences of book two in the series, Crow’s Haven. Of course for the second book to happen I need to get Crow’s Gambit published...just sayin...


Vignette #2 (Churchill)

Captain Winslow studied the sonar display. The Churchill could have tracked the surface ship’s cavitation wave from the other side of the Atlantic if they needed to. It was screaming ‘here I am’ for anyone to hear. 

“Is that our target?” he asked the sailor on sonar duty. 

“Yes sir. There is a match with the vibration profile on record. The civilian transport Hermes. Registered to Darrow Shipping under U.S. flag.” 

“Are you absolutely positive son?” Winslow secretly hoped there was some doubt. 

“Positive. Its profile, course, and location are all an exact match. That’s her.” 

“Very well.” The Captain turned back to the rest of the Control Room with a sigh. “Deck officer, take us to battle stations. Stand by to launch UUVs.” 

The officer turned a quizzical face toward him. “Sir?” she asked. 

“Release the hounds Lieutenant.” 

The Lieutenant nodded and issued the orders. Several small unmanned underwater vehicles sped away from the Churchill and toward the surface craft. The Churchill was a Manta class hunter-killer submarine. Built for speed and standoff stealth. While her onboard weapons were substantial the real power was in the fleet of drones she could deploy. 

“Deploy in attack pattern beta Lieutenant.” 

“Attack pattern beta, yes sir.” The Lieutenant scrutinized the work of two sailors as they issued commands to the drones. “UUVs are in position sir.” 

“Very good. Sensor station do you have any other signals in the area? Anything else on the surface?” The Captain silently waited and prayed for divine intervention. 

“The surface is clear Captain. No other signals in the area.” 

Winslow’s shoulders slumped as he let out a large sigh. “Weapons officer, arm the UUVs and prepare to fire on the surface craft.” 

“Captain?” The Lieutenant frowned at him. 

He handed her the small printout he had been clutching in his fist for the last hour. “Our orders are to destroy the vessel Lieutenant.” 

“But sir, that’s a civilian vessel. There are over 300 passengers and crew on board.” 

“Ours is not to question why Lieutenant.” He gave her an understanding smile. “For what it’s worth I will make sure to note your concern in my log. Weapon’s officer on my mark.” The young sailor nodded uncertainly, his finger over the execute button. “Fire,” Winslow commanded. 

In the distance two of the drones accelerated and executed an inverted parabolic course intended to bring them up directly under the target. As they closed the distance their internal electronics automatically armed the detonators to their high yield H-9 explosives. The Weapon’s Officer counted down to impact. 

“Five…four…three…” 

“Transients,” the signals officer suddenly called out. “Multiple fast movers!” 

Almost simultaneously the weapons officer chimed in. “We’ve lost contact with the UUVs.” 

“We’re getting wide bandwidth diffraction on EM and optical,” the Lieutenant reported. 

“Squid drones,” the Captain concluded. Small highly maneuverable drones that threw out clouds of sharp edged reflective particles that could confuse communications and sensing. If there was a school of squid drones out there then somewhere nearby there was an American Concord class fast attack submarine. And it had probably just watched them fire on the civilian vessel. 

“Helm, make our depth…” 

“New transients!” the signals office interrupted. “Pulse jet propulsors. Positive identification as Mark-72 torpedoes.” 

Yes, the Captain thought to himself. They had been watching. 
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    Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for The Seclusion

    I’m sitting at my desk this lovely morning, watching the snow fall out the window of my mountainside home and feeling very grateful for all of you. This update is coming a little later than usual, and for that, I apologize. I was waiting to hear back on a few points so that this update could be a bit more substantial than the last few. And, it will be!

    I have multiple exciting updates to share with you!

    1) Developmental Edit Progress

    Since my update at the end of October, I have concluded another round of developmental edit rewrites. The book is now back in the hands of my editor. He is going through one more time (he estimates this will take about two weeks), and then he plans to send the book to a beta-reader to get some third-party, objective feedback. We will then use that feedback to do one more pass before forwarding the book to a copy-editor.

    2) Title change

    While I like The Walls are Closing In (and we may still use it as a tagline for the book), we have decided that a different title is more marketable, provides a bit of mystery, and is catchier for the future selling of property rights (fingers crossed).

    So, without further ado, the new title is:

    The Seclusion

    3) Genre Change

    We are making a few changes to the plot and market the book as YA(Young Adult). This will only marginally change the story but will double the audience. It allows us to not only market the book to fans of books such as 1984, Fahrenheit 541, and The Handmaid’s Tale, but also to fans of books such as The Hunger Games and Divergent.

    3) Release Date!

    The book has been assigned a tentative release date and an ISBN number (this second part is probably not exciting to anyone but me).

    The Seclusion is currently set to publish on:

    October 2, 2018!

    This is a bit later than I had hoped, but I am beyond thrilled that there is an official trajectory. Between now and then I will be doing everything in my power to ensure that the launch is a success.

    One last note - the first two chapters on the book’s page have been updated to reflect the changes that we have been making. Feel free to check them out!

    Until next time,

    -Jacqui

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      Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for Tantalus Depths

      Hello friends and supporters.

      Well, NaNoWriMo has come and gone. It was not an altogether unprofitable month, though it was not as profitable as it should have been. I’m not sure who got the idea that the national novel writing month should be smack in the middle of the holiday season, but it’s not the most conducive of times for reaching lofty goals.

      As I said, though, it was not unprofitable. I managed to write two full, reasonably sizeable chapters in Proteus, for one. As far as Tantalus Depths goes, I’d say I’m approximately 50% done with the current draft’s revisions. By that, I mean about 50% done with the changes I plan to make before turning the whole thing back over to my editor to see what he thinks of it. It’s possible he’ll want me to make additional changes at that point before we move to the next stage in the production process, but this draft is the one where the biggest changes will happen.

      My current goal is to have this draft 100% finished by the end of the year. I doubt my editor will want to work on it during the holidays, but if I have work left to do at that point, I’m going to do it anyway. I am so ready to move ahead in this process it’s not funny. I really want to get through the monotony and frustration of editing so I can get back to the excitement of actual writing, but one thing at a time.

      Hopefully my next update will signal the triumphant wrapping-up of my current draft and the next phase of the process. Stay tuned!

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        Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for Blood Capital

        Hello everyone, 

        The year is almost over! This should be my last update for 2017 so I wanted to wish you all a happy holiday period and New Year. 

        Things have been hectic in the world of Blood Capital. Inkshares and I are pushing hard to get the book ready for print, and it’s been all hands on deck. I’m still in edits, but things are getting pointy — the last week has seen long hours devoted to getting a sample of the book ready for sales reps from the major bookstore chains. There’s also been more progress on development of a final cover. As soon as I have that, I’ll be sending out a special update.

        Everyone always asks how the book is going, and I love that people haven’t lost interest yet. I’m really excited by the way the story is developing with support from the Inkshares team and putting as much time and love into the project as I can. To keep me honest, and to keep you all in the loop, I’ve upped my game for tracking work on the novel. I’ve created a Tableau Public Dashboard which I update at the end of each writing session. Tracking of my hours is new, so there’s only three weeks of data for that, but hopefully it shows I haven’t been slacking. With a toddler and a demanding day job, it’s sometimes difficult to find the time. Thankfully, I love writing, so I’ve upped my coffee intake and am putting in the hours to get this done. Below is are some static screenshots of the dashboards, but if you follow this link you’ll get an interactive version.

        PS: When I started the major rewrites as part of this developmental edit, I pulled most of the samples of the novel from the Inkshares website, as too many details were changing. Over the next month I plan to put a few new samples back up, so keep an eye out for a taste as to how the story as developed from those early days.

        As always, thank you.

        Robert

        https://robertbatten.net

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          Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for The Lore of the Aos Sí

          The Paperback Verison of Nemeton: The Trial of Calas is Live on Amazon!

          I got the news from Amazon last night, the 6x9 paperback is available and will arrive in time for Christmas! You can purchase it here...

          The Kindle Version is still available for $.99 or for free on Kindle Unlimited 

          Here is an excerpt from the book to give you a taste! 

          By my blood, I will not cease my service,
          By my blood, I will break the bonds,
          By my blood, I will bring forth justice,
          For father, my people, and all.
               As she sat in darkness, repeating her blood oath a warm light enveloped her. She sensed the stone draw from her the venomous anger and rage that had entrapped her. She focused pouring her anger, hate, and sadness into the stone and watched as it transmuted to singular purpose.
               “Rage is a material, a material that can be forged into righteous purpose. Create a weapon within your mind, steel yourself and resolve to end that which was taken so much from you. If you do this, nothing will stand in your way.” said the warlock. “What you hold in your hands Samsara is the ancient stone of the Kings of Men. It will show us the way, it will show us the one who bears the mark of redemption, the one who will rend the bonds. It contains the memories of all things long since past. With it you cannot be defeated. It has chosen you to be the one, the steward of the throne, until the rightful body can take its place upon it.”
               His words seemed to cause the stone to vibrate. Samsara gripped the stone. Falbanach spoke to her in the ancient language. As he did, she began to understand the stone’s power. It spoke to her. It showed her the ancient battles of the heavens, the past as it truly happened. In her hands was the power to change the world, she but had to have the resolve to use it.
               “Listen to its wisdom and it will show you the proper path,” he said.
          Samsara closed off all other thought. As she fell into the power of the stone, she saw a small glimpse of her future. She stood before her future self. Though her future did not speak to her, she could tell the place her path carried her was one not of brokenness or pain, but of righteous fury against the forces that had destroyed her world.
               With her vows complete and her purpose realized, Samsara sat in the center of her cell in contemplation, forging a spiritual blade she would wield against the forces of chaos until she no longer drew breath. In her alchemical laboratory of the mind, she toiled and transformed herself into a living weapon.

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            Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for Beyond The Code

            Hello there fantastic followers, 

            Production of Beyond the Code is going great and I finally have to time to put all my efforts into marketing my debut novel. Part of my marketing plan has been updating Beyond the Code’s facebook page. This page will be chock full of Beyond the Code content such as news on production, concept art, reviews, interviews, and more. So please, follow the link and follow the page for Beyond the Code updates and content. 

            https://www.facebook.com/BTCInkshares/

            For those who have followed Beyond the Code but haven’t yet pre-ordered, please consider joining this club. Just see what these amazing authors have said about it. 

            Craig Munro, author of Bones of the Past says "Elegant descriptions, endless action and super powers - go check out this urban fantasy"

            Tony Valdez, author of Dax Harrison says "Fast paced, action-packed fantasy! I can see the movie in my head already!"

            Brian Guthrie, author of Rise says "An amazing concept that you won’t regret supporting"

            These awesome authors know their stuff, so trust them when they say that Beyond the Code is definitely worth your support. Help make my first novel as successful as possible before it’s release. 

            Thank you all for following me on this journey. 

            Kelsey Rae Barthel  


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              Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for APEX

              Exciting news! My new author website is now live! Check out https://deborahmunroauthor.com to see all the great content.

              For the past couple of months, I’ve been working with my web designer, Mary Ann Aschenbrenner of Waterlink Web to create a fabulous new website to promote my book, tell you more about me as a person, share my other publications, provide interesting and meaningful content on how to use social media for marketing, discuss science related to APEX (https://www.inkshares.com/books/apex), and provide a portal to connect with me on various social media platforms.

              You can even connect with me on my business website and LinkedIn to learn more about my professional life and research interests. So, don’t be shy, as I’m basically giving you permission to stalk me online (just not in person).

              Currently, there are seven publications and three blogs posted on my website, and more will come every week. 

              The ability to sign up for my blog is now live, and the ability to subscribe via email is coming soon. I’m also working with Christopher Lee, author of Nemeton (click on link to purchase on Amazon), to update my video trailer, and that will be online soon.

              If you’re on social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, or LinkedIn, please feel free to share anything you find interesting with your followers. Also, on the Home page, you can link to any of these platforms and follow me to get instant updates of new content.

              As for APEX book news, my manuscript rewrite is coming along. I have reworked over 35k words, and I’m on a roll. Creating this website was a priority, as it’s important that I begin advertising well before my novel is released. I’ve tapped out all my friends and family, and now I’m launching into the great online unknown to find my fans and readers worldwide.

              Thank you as always for your faithful support and encouragement! I continue to strive to provide you the best book I can possibly write.

              You can send me an email using the contact page, or directly at dmunro@deborahmunroauthor.com. I’d love to hear from you.

              Cheers, Debbie
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                Brian Fitzpatrick liked an update for The Lore of the Aos Sí

                Greetings Readers and Inkshares Supporters!

                Just popping in to let you all know about the latest deals and news for Nemeton Now Available on Amazon!

                First is that there is an #AmazonGiveaway. Free copies available to a dozen lucky winners who enter. All you have to do is tweet about the release of Nemeton!

                Click here for more details! https://giveaway.amazon.com/p/6ff67e893ba694f4

                Second is that the Paperback Edition of Nemeton is soon to go live! Here is a sneak peak at the cover!

                The Paperback should be live within the next day or so! When it is I will send everyone here a link. I will be running a promo for all of my Inkshares.com supporters.

                If you can’t wait, Nemeton the Kindle Release is still on sale for only $.99 until December 9th! Also Free to read on Kindle Unlimited! http://amzn.to/2Bj6VeN


                Pick Up Your Copy Today!

                I look forward to hearing from you, seeing reviews (good or bad), and conversing with you more!

                Christopher Lee
                www.christopherleeauthor.com

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