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Greetings, Faoii! Are you all ready to hear which of our brothers and sisters get to name/design the seven characters in our contest? Yes? Great!

But first you have to wait and listen to me talk about something else for a second.

Today is November 1st. For many writers, this is the beginning of NaNoWriMo-- a month where we all set a writing goal and dedicate ourselves to bettering our craft. A lot of people spend this first day feeling bad about how little they wrote, promising to do better. But guess what! Even if you didn’t write a single word today, you’re still doing better than me! My word count for the first day of November: -3,000 words. That’s right. No matter how bad-off you are, you’re NOT in the negatives. So go you!

haha. I am still going through my final edit of The Last Faoii. When I first finished it and started querying it to agents 3 years ago, it was at an atrocious 117,346 words spread over 19 chapters. I, of course, had no idea that it needed so much help and sent it out to 200 agents without a care in the world. Thank god someone told me that it was too long and inspired me to truly look at it and see what was to be done. It has been through 15 or so edits since then, each one bringing it closer to perfection than the last.

I still have about 40 pages to get through, but as of now The Last Faoii is 97,096 words spread out over 41 easier-to-digest chapters. My fantoii cut through all that was unnecessary to the ultimate goals of our army, its blade dripping with superfluous description and bulky exposition. Nearly 20,000 words have met their end in the name of greatness.

Looking back now, the worst thing I could have heard at the time (It’s too long. It’ll never be published) turned out to be a blessing. Because it forced me to make something better. Something amazing. I read over the first 30 pages of both versions today to see the difference-- and I could not be more pleased with the changes that have come. 97k words is still probably too long for most publishers, but not with inkshares. Not with all of you backing me up. So thank you. And good luck with your own writing for NaNo!

Okay. On to the contest:

1. Current Name: Mollie-Faoii
Now in the hands of Zack Jordan

2. Current Name: Faoii-Leigh
Now in the hands of K.E. Madsen

3. Current Name: Ray Goodman
Now in the hands of Joshua Griffith

4. Current Name: Linda Goodman
Now in the hands of Megan Galindo

5. Current Name: Samuel Harkins
Now in the hands of Amanda Garner

6. Current Name: Faoii-Joanna
Now in the hands of Jesse Moore

7. Current Name: Faoii-Elizabeth
Now in the hands of  Scott R. Mcinnes


Congratulations to all the winners! I’ve contacted you with a direct message either on inkshares or on facebook! I really look forward to seeing what you all come up with! 

That’s it for today, Faoii! Dismissed and happy writing!

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    Updates, Faoii! Listen up!

    I promised you all that I would do an audio version of Chapter 2 if we made it to 270 pre-orders. We’ve done that, so I’m upholding my end of the bargain. You can listen to it on youtube by clicking HERE.

    Other than the audio chapter, I’ve been doing everything in my power to bring you perfection. I want us to take that hill-- I want us to stand at its summit with our war cries on our tongues and our victory in our hearts and for everyone to know that all of this finally came to fruition. That there’s some sort of karmic justice in the universe that repays hard work and determination. That at the end of next week we’ll know that The Last Faoii had finally earned mass publication and that maybe my health would finally improve and my heart wouldn’t be so tired all the time. Because dreams keep us going when other things don’t.

    But we’re warriors. We need contingency plans. Realism. I don’t know how to produce miracles-- I don’t know how to inspire you all any more than I’ve already tried to. I was never able to get us featured in the Inkshares blog like many of the other authors we’ve fought (and in some cases, overcome). I was never quite able to get us to 4th place in this contest, much less to the top 3. But that doesn’t mean I’m going to stop trying. You’d think after submitting The Last Faoii to 200 agents during its initial run 18 edits ago, I would be used to rejection-- to falling short. But I don’t, because it’s just not something I do. 

    I don’t know how to get us to the top of that hill. But I do know how to give you the best I can, no matter the outcome of the contest. Even if we fail at parts of the war, the victories we have will be perfect. There are no half measures here.

    So I’m editing again. I’m going through The Last Faoii a 19th and final time since its completion--looking for any errors, any sentence, any word that doesn’t add to the story. That doesn’t prove to be absolutely worthy of your attention. I’ve sent it out to two more beta readers (numbers 13 and 14 if that matters to you) with instructions to make it perfect. 

    If those that are following this army now are the only ones who are ever going to know how hard we fought to win this war-- if we will be the only ones to see the forces that Kaiya overcame just to exist, then I will make sure the reward at the end is worthy of the battle fought. 

    Shield up, Faoii. The end is coming and we will not meet it lying down.

    -Faoii-Tahani

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      Greetings, Faoii!

      Are you the type of person that likes to listen to chapters rather than reading them? Well, then you might like this audio version of Chapter 1 (I put it on youtube because I figured that was one of the more convenient ways for people to listen in). 

      This is entirely new territory to me-- videos, audio and things that don’t involve my pounding frantically at a keyboard. But I’m trying. I hope you like it. :)

      -Faoii-Tahani
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        Updates, Faoii! Listen up!

        There’s NINE days left in the contest. This is exciting to me, but it should also be exciting to you for 2 reasons:

        1) I’ll still be picking THREE people to name a character from The Last Faoii on October 31. If you want your chance, make sure to pre-order before then!

        2) Are you the type of person that likes to LISTEN to books instead of reading them? Well, I’ve started recording The Last Faoii, one chapter at a time. I’ll post one of the excerpts in the next couple days as a sample, but then it’s up to you! You get us to number 4 in the contest and I’ll start posting full chapters. Pretty awesome, right?

        We’ve fallen back to number 6 in the contest again, but I’m not surprised. Every time I rise to number 5 A Light in the Void gets one more reader within 12 hours and pushes us back down. It’s actually been rather amusing and I’m enjoying the leapfrog almost as much as any other part of the contest. Don’t worry, Faoii. We’ll prove our worth.

        Shields up.
        -Faoii-Tahani
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          So I know I’ve been saying how excited I am to have finally hit Quill and to know that my book will be in the hands of actual people sometime in the near future. But, honestly, I don’t think it hit me until today.

          On the way home from work I had to pull over because I was suddenly, intensely aware of how much work it has taken to come this far. I saw every word I wrote, erased, re-wrote, re-erased, and re-re-wrote. Every character I sketched into notebooks and introduced to paper, as ready to tell their story as a child on the first day of school. I saw every excited key stroke as I experienced new events and people that screamed at me to make them real. I saw every moment of anticipation as I waited for my betas to respond. A thousand smiles when they praised something they liked or offered advice to make the story better. Every bit of terror as I wrote out queries, and more anticipation as I waited for a response. I re-experienced each and every time my heart dropped into my stomach at an agent’s rejection. And another. And another. The determined flits of my fingers as I turned each letter into a different origami animal to add to the ever-growing zoo. I felt that tiny spark of hope that glimmered when someone finally told me what was wrong with the original manuscript. Too long. Too long. The fevered dash to correct the issue-- erasing entire chapters, people, subplots. The tearful goodbyes as I deleted entire lives so that the others might have a fighting chance. The uncertainty of trying a less-than-traditional publisher. The soul-crushing doubt for each day I didn’t get a single pre-order. The amazement each time I did.

          And it all brought me to... this. Laughing and sobbing on the side of the road, tears streaking my face even as my cheeks hurt from smiling. Amazed and relieved and humbled all at once.

          It’s indescribable. Thank you.
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            Greetings, Faoii!

            I have a new interview up for your enjoyment, this one from Erachaelhardcastle. I like this one because it tells you every step of my writing process, and offers some advice for aspiring writers. Click HERE to read it.

            Faoii-Tahani

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              WE DID IT, FAOII! WE REACHED QUILL!

              Five years of working on this. 200 agents that either said "no thanks" or nothing at all. Dozens of re-writes. Thousands of moments of doubt. All of it has finally come to this. We reached Quill. No matter what happens now, this book will be a physical, real thing. People will be able to read Kaiya’s story. Her world will not be lost to oblivion. 

              Thanks to all of you.

              I can not adequately explain my feelings on the matter. For so long, this has been my everything. And now there’s finally a chance of it becoming more than that. Mostly, I feel humbled. Elated. Terrified. Alive. 

              It is wonderful.

              The battle isn’t over, of course. There’s still a couple weeks left in the Geek and Sundry Contest. It’s going to be hard-- damn near impossible, actually-- but according to the rejection-letter-origami-zoo I have sitting in my office, so was getting this far. "Impossible" is just a word, and not one that is in faoii vocabulary.

              We’ve made it this far. We can take that hill, and we can still claim more victories in the final month before the campaign ends. The idea of "failure" is officially behind us-- there is no losing now.

              Fight on, Faoii. I have never been so proud of this army as I am now. 

              Thank you for everything.

              -Faoii-Tahani
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                Greetings, Faoii!

                I’m having a good day today. First, I woke up this morning and someone had egged my car-- but I was able to get all the egg off without issue and Caroline still looks fine (Yes, my car’s name is Caroline.) Then I went to a #selflove photoshoot and had SO much fun! I feel beautiful and amazing and ready to sell some pre-orders! Because, if I’m being honest, I’m much better at writing than modeling-- but if I was able to succeed at the one, there’s no excuse for not excelling at the other.

                As of now we’re 17 pre-orders away from Quill. We’re SO close. I am excited to see us reach that milestone.

                Take care of yourselves.

                Tahani

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                  Oh, yeah, Faoii. One more thing:

                  We have 36 days to get 36 pre-orders. One a day from here until the end. People know our banner-- they know our fight. We just need to convince them that they are worthy of picking up a blade and joining it. That we need them. Spread the word, soldier. One a day. We can do that.

                  Also, if you haven’t been following the forums, here’s what Faoli-Joey had to say about our army this week:

                  "Though still at 6th place on the site, The Last Faoii by Tahani Nelson is actually tied with A Light in the Void for 5th place! A strong, ferocious campaign has helped Ms. Nelson make her way into the Top 5 and she’s not planning on stopping any time soon. The Epic Fantasy Syndicate has backed The Last Faoii and that support has brought Ms. Nelson under 50 preorders away from reaching quill! She’s also raffling off a chance to name one of the many characters in her book as well as early beta reading privileges, so now is definitely the time to join the fight! As I’ve said before, this is probably one of, if not *the* funnest campaign going on in the entire contest and it’s definitely worth the time to be a part of it. Go check out Ms. Nelson’s page as well as the book page for The Last Faoii for more information!"

                  Thanks you, Faoii-Joey, for your words of support. I’m glad you’re having so much fun with this war-- I don’t like being the only one delighting in the fight!!

                  Faoii-Tahani out.

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                    Updates, Faoii! Listen up!!

                    Another amazing victory for our army today! We’ve officially been backed by the Epic Fantasy Syndicate. Their medal is now proudly displayed in the barracks next to the other 2. Welcome our new brothers and sisters to the fray!

                    Today also brought us to 200 pre-orders and 5th place in the contest!! 200 pre-orders, Faoii! 50 more and we’ll reach Quill. Victory is so close I can taste it.

                    Don’t forget-- I’m still raffling off the chance to name one of several characters AND an edit/beta read of the work of your choice. Everyone who’s pre-ordered is entered into the contest, so don’t fret if you’re a seasoned Faoii--I haven’t forgotten you or what you’ve done for us. 

                    Take care of yourselves and each other, Faoii. We’re higher up the hill than we’ve been yet. Only 2 people stand between us and full publication. Let’s show them who we are!

                    Faoii-Tahani

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