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First off, when I talked about the Sartval earlier this week I meant to link the chapters of Magus they appear in as well.  They first appear in Chapter 10 and Pentaz’ full experience with them ranges from there to Chapter 17(a span that also covers his introduction to Buscidia).  So if you want to read a bit more about that savage race of dwarves in action click the link above.

After a bit of a wall my campaign has started to pick up a little steam again, though we’ll need a great deal more if we’re going to make it so I’m hoping I can convince more of you who have followed but not ordered yet to do so.  As stated at the beginning of the campaign, for every 25 readers I’ll post a new chapter.  We’re only 8 more people away from the next chapter, and if we can hit 100 readers by 9/18 I’ll post 3 bonus chapters beyond those for each set of 25 people.

Moving on from the sales pitch though, I’m continuing my discussion of the different types of dwarves in my world.  Next on the list are the Ansvari, their representative in Exile, Magus being Talari.  She’s a bit of an intellectual, explorer, and a more knowledgeable magus than Pentaz, and she’s pictured below in the wonderful new art from Lho Brochoff.  She doesn’t come in until the last act (quarter really) of the story, but if I get to post the bonus chapters mentioned above I will release 3 of those featuring her.  She is one of the main characters in the sequel - Exile, Hunted, and most every Exile book to follow.  I’ve linked this previously but I feel it deserves linking again in case you want to read an interaction from her childhood between Talari and her grandmother.

The Ansvari as a people are perhaps the least traditional Dwarves.  They tend to live on wide open plains or sylvan glades, organized into loose tribal societies unofficial led by an elder and/or shaman(sometimes this is the same person).

They are a hunter/gatherer people who hold the spirits of nature, both elemental and otherwise, in deep regard.  They don’t necessarily worship these spirits, but they always respect them.  In truth they have much in common with the Wilder Elves, though they do put more importance on physical prowess than the Elves.  Many Ansvari practice at least minor household magic, though not to the extent of the Elves.  They also tend to be a curious people, though they usually limit their fields of study to those of the natural or magical world.

The bulk of the Ansvari tribes originally lived in a region of the Melexi empire now occupied by southern Zaltruscas and western Hanaen.  As the Zaltruscan empire spread it demanded that the Ansvari cede their land and pledge their allegiance to the Empire.  Most refused leading to a ruthless invasion by the Zaltruscans.  In the conflict over half the resisting tribes were eradicated, prisoners executed in town squares or made to fight hopeless battles in the arenas to serve as examples.

Those tribes which survived only did so by fleeing east across the World’s Cleft River and taking refuge in the free Counties of Hanaen.  Some of these tribes have found welcoming homes there, though a few such at Talari’s tribe, the Niajiry, are forced to live as little more than squatters in a county whose lord detests them.

I’ll leave my description of them at that, and as with the previous Dwarven subgroups I’ll post up a prototype of a 5th edition D&D racial option of them for anyone interested.  As for the rest of you, I want to once again thank you for your time and support, and my sincere wish that you keep reading and enjoying.

  • Ability Score Increase:  +1 Intelligence, +1 Wisdom, +1 Constitution.
  • Age:  Typically reach adulthood at around 60-70 years and live up to 450-500 years(though most die in battle before this).
  • Alignment:  Can be any alignment, but most commonly are NG.
  • Size:  Medium, stand between 3’10" - 4’6", though on vary rare occasions there may be an individual who reaches as tall as 4’8".
  • Speed:  25’.
  • Cantrip:  Choose any 1 from the Druid or Wizard list.  If chosen from the Druid list then Wisdom is you spellcasting ability; if chosen from the Wizard list then Intelligence is your spellcasting ability.
  • Armor Training:  Proficient with Light armor.
  • Weapn Training:  Proficient with Pike, Rapier, Longbow, and Shortbow.
  • Tool Training:  Proficient with any 1 of the following - Leatherworker’s tools, Weaver’s tools, or Woodcarver’s tools.
  • Skill Training:  You are proficient with 3 chosen skills from the following list - Arcana, Nature, Perception, Religion, Stealth, and Survival.
  • Languages:  Common, Dwarvish and 1 of the following - Draconic, Elven, Primordial, or Sylvan.

Also, to those of you who have been reading these D&D options each time, I would like some input.  A good friend of mine who has been playing in my D&D games for over a decade recently suggested I start taking advantage of the OGL to release a portion of Exile, Magus’ world for purchase online as a campaign setting.  Would this be something you’d be interested in?  Message me either here or through my Facebook page to let me know(or through Twitter - @thoasoold, but I’m bad about forgetting to check Twitter messages).

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    For Day 2 of my week of referrals, I want to direct your attention to a fascinating book that’s been campaigning slowly but steadily, amassing a large following without much fanfare. Yet its success so far is no surprise at all; once you do catch sight of this book, it holds your attention from then on.

     

    Murder at the Veterans’ Club is exactly what you hope it will be: a pure love letter to the golden age of detective fiction. Set in post WWI London, Murder at the Veterans’ Club follows Eric Peterkin as he seeks to find the truth behind the murder of a colleague, seeking the answers to a crime the police have no intention of solving.

    Christopher Huang has clearly written this book out of a deep-seated love for the genre, and it shows. The tone, plot, characterization and language are all painstakingly delivered in the style of classic detective literature, resulting in a story that reads as if it were a manuscript recently pulled from a vault left sealed for 90 years.

    If you yearn for a new Holmes or Poirot novel, you owe it to yourself to give Peterkin a try.

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      My third recommendation for the week draws once more from the wellspring that is Geek and Sundry’s fantasy competition. 

      "Fantasy" being as broad a genre as it is, this contest has brought in more prospective authors than any other Inkshares contest to date, and, predictably, many of the entrants are lackluster. Fantasy is one of those genres where many people are prone to the pitfall of thinking their stories are more original or interesting than they really are, resulting in a wash of samey, uninspired Tolkein/Lewis/Martin clones. In spite of this, however, there are some stories that manage to truly stand out in the crowd for their brilliant premises, artful world-building, and complex characterization. The Living God is a paragon example of these crucial features.


      Kaytalin Platt has crafted a brilliantly multifaceted fantasy in The Living God. This is a story that effortlessly blends the best of high fantasy, urban fantasy, and dystopian science fiction into a seamlessly cohesive whole. Three worlds: one a medieval fantasy setting, one a modern Earth setting, and one an Orwellian future setting. Each world is locked away from the others, traverseable only by mages.

      One mage, Saran, is tasked with two overwhelming responsibilities: to supplant her father, the mad king of the realm, and to prevent the love of her life from being consumed from within by a primordial abomination from the dawn of the universe. Also, her magic has been stripped from her.

      So much speaks to me in this book, and I simply cannot wait to see more. Please give this story a look!


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        Yes, I am absolutely the kind of person who’d use his birthday to guilt people into ordering his book. At this point, that shouldn’t surprise anyone.

        If you’d like to send some birthday cheer my way, please consider pre-ordering Tantalus Depths, and get some friends and family to do the same!

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          Hello lovely readers!!

          Exciting news! Our syndicate (Break the Bechdel with Strong Female Characters found here: https://www.inkshares.com/syndicates/break-the-bechdel-with-strong-female-characters ) just surpassed the CEO Syndicate in highest number of members! We are (at least for the moment) the largest Syndicate on Inkshares! So lucky to have found such amazing people who are intelligent, respectful and passionate about increasing the number of strong/fully-realized female characters in this world. If you haven’t joined yet, please check it out. The discussions alone are worth it =)

          More updates to come soon...including the rough artwork of the new cover for The Talkers are Talking.

          Thanks, as always, for your support.
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