The excerpts for Proxy are well paced and intriguing and I can’t (can’t can’t I don’t wanna!) wait for more.  I have to agree with previous commentors and say that I love the American Gods feel of the writing and story-so-far. 

I think you have a great start to something that will turn out to be a great read, and I can’t wait to see what you do with all the possibilities given in the characters of the "Others".  The excerpts you’ve shared have already left me wanting more.  Keep working and keep us updated!