Hello, Julian. I'll take your suggestion into consideration but I'm purposefully using older, even archaic, forms of words to suit an intentional rhyming scheme. Note below the word 'psychical' is the word 'essential', and in the middle of the line below that is the word 'eventually'. Those would be the hard rhymes, Then there is alliteration throughout the entire sentence (note the multiple occurrence of words that contain the letter 'l').
Thank you for reading through my work. Military weekend for me. When I'm better rested, I'll make sure to read through yours. I found the first paragraph intriguing enough to make me follow along.
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Hello, Julian. I'll take your suggestion into consideration but I'm purposefully using older, even archaic, forms of words to suit an intentional rhyming scheme. Note below the word 'psychical' is the word 'essential', and in the middle of the line below that is the word 'eventually'. Those would be the hard rhymes, Then there is alliteration throughout the entire sentence (note the multiple occurrence of words that contain the letter 'l').