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Good morning Hexers!

First of all I want to say a hearty congrats to the top 10 in the Nerdist Space Opera contest. It’s rough to get so close and not get the prize, I’ve been there. Even if you didn’t win, I want you to feel proud of how many people rallied around your book. That is your real success.

Attention Lurkers, you can help this book!

I just received my 198th follower for DHM, and that is super amazing to me. I am here to ask you a favor though. There are about 60 of you that have yet to preorder the book -- and we are coincidentally 68 orders from our first funding goal. I would like to get your feedback as to why you haven’t yet pulled the trigger on ordering the book. Please email me at amanda@goldleafbooks.com and let me know why.  If there is something more I can do to convince all the followers of this book to back it, I want to do it.

I for my part am on the last scene of Chapter three. This is a major set piece, so it’s taking me a while, but I will give you a clue as to the location:

and Ooh so intriguing!

I am hoping to have this last scene done by the end of the week, which means I will have a third chapter to share with you soon.  Like mega soon.

Anyway, have a great Wednesday and I’ll talk to you soon. Like mega soon.


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    Nicola Sarjeant liked an update for And the Wolf Shall Dwell

    Morning supporters and readers! 
    with 94 pre-orders we are closing in on a milestone 100 soon. I shall upload another teaser chapter in the coming days - stay tuned!

    As per some requests - i will make available a PDF version of the already uploaded chapters , as people have asked to read them on kindle/Ipad and not through Inkshares. This will be available on http://www.jondbooks.com later today.

    Finally - a HUGE THANKS to anyone who ordered and supports the project. It means the world to me.
    Would be also great if when you have a second, you each email ONE person you think may be interested, in order to keep the momentum rolling.

    thanks
    x
    Jonathan

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      Nicola Sarjeant liked an update for LOUISIANA BLOOD - A Chandler Travis and Duke  Lanoix mystery

      Thanks everybody, your responses were really great!  It seems that a whole bunch of you are into the horror angle so here’s a little treat. Another scene where our dastardly slice and dicers are up to their elbows in the governments dirty work...the birth of Jack The Ripper!

      As ever, if you want to boost me over the quill Frontier that’s great...I’m only a few pre-orders away from 50% funded.  HIT HERE TO HELP

      Also a good friend of mine is racing to climb higher in the Nerdist Space Opera contest with SPACE TRIPPING, so if you have any credits burning a hole in your spacesuits why not give him a boost! HERE

      Okay...put on your butchers aprons to avoid blood splatter on your souls!

      “And so it was, the plan unfolded and the bodies were dumped... “

      LONDON STREET

      Inside a dark carriage swathed with dark blue velvet a knife slashes at a hanging body inflicting mutilations...blood drips from the corpse...

      The body that will be identified as Dark Annie, is taken from the carriage and placed stealthily in Hanbury Street. Whistles are blown. Across London a carriage waits outside an Ice Factory. Inside a body is taken from a room wreathed in cold vapour.

      Another body, to be identified as Long Liz is dumped in Berner Street.

      A boy sells newspapers on the corner of the street Their lurid headlines chart the spread of fear, and the arrival of the Letter From Hell...signed by Jack The Ripper...and so history is forged in the crucible of their lies.

                                                                                           ***

      She lay in his arms. For the first time in a long while she felt safe. She’d listened to his story, the corruption and the plans he’d heard them discussing. She knew that sooner or later they would come for her. It was only a matter of time. She’d been with many men in her short life, some of them kind, a lot of them cruel and some of them so disgusting in their demands she sometimes felt she would never be able to wash herself clean again. But lying there in the dark, naked and enveloped in Edwards gentle arms, for the first time in her life she realised the love she had been missing. 

      She found it hard to believe that even amongst the terror in this dark time, love could find the necessary sustenance to bloom like a rose in the night. Amongst the flickering shadows thrown by candlelight Kelly’s eyes sparkled with love for Edward, her feelings for him surged through her. “It came as a shock to me...that after all the bad times that I’d had with men...I was able to love again...and with such passion...but we both knew that time was running out...”

                                                                                             ***

      Kelly and Edward hurriedly pack some things, getting ready to leave. He gives her a lingering kiss. “I won’t be long. We’ll be on the boat tonight bound for Ireland. Your friends in Limerick will meet us when we dock and we can stay with them till we sort ourselves out.

      Edward opened the door, gave her a last look and left. She watched him go. In her hand she held a pocket watch, a silver half hunter that he’d given her so she would know when to be ready for his return. She ran her finger over the initials E.D, engraved into the back of the watch before sitting down on the edge of the bed to await his return.

                                                                                               ***

      The carriage stood in the shadows. The horses snorting vapour into the cold air...eyes rolling, hooves shivering against the cobbles, as if they were aware of what was taking place inside.

      He bent over the body that lay slumped inside the carriage. The unyielding flesh already stiffening. His knife was sharp and sure as he hacked through the pale flesh beneath him. His eyes black and dead, face a mask of madness Tumblety becomes more violent with each sweep of the knife...his hands stroking the dead flesh, caressing the wetness beneath his fingers like a lover. Then the knife goes back to work. He reached into the cavern he had created in the body. His mouth a grim slit. 

      This was the part he loved the most. The level of intimacy with another human that could never be achieved while they were alive…that’s what made this special for him. He reached in and swiftly identified the organ by touch alone. He lifted it up, cut the skeins of fibrous muscle that held it fast. Dropped it into the glass jar he held ready. It slid inside with a glutinous sucking sound. He sealed the lid shut. Now he just needed to place the remains for maximum effect. He rapped twice on the roof and he heard the coachman snap the whip. The carriage lurched and soon the wheels clattered on the cobbles and they headed into the night.

      Mitre Square was deserted at that time of the morning. Even the women of the night had long since given up their trade. The dank grey fog that swept across the slick cobblestones served to hide the coach that stood waiting. Tumblety carried the shapeless lump over his shoulder as he moved quickly over to the opposite side of the street and laid the corpse down against the brick wall of the house. 

      He had to be quick, and set the scene for the luckless person that would stumble on the ghoulish sight. He arranged her skirts, exposing bloodied flesh and draping the gleaming entrails around her neck like some grotesque wet necklace. Pleased with his work he moved quickly across the street and climbed back into the carriage. The coach clattered through the fog leaving swirling curtains of vapour behind as it disappeared from sight.

      Kelly sat on the edge of the bed with her hand resting on her packed case. She didn’t need to look at the watch to realise something was wrong. Edward should have been there by now. Something was happening outside. She stood up…the door was kicked in. A group of men burst into the room. Two of them are Dr Tumblety and Dr Neil Cream. A burly man grabs her and clamps a hand over her mouth. She could smell the whisky on his breath as he leaned over her. “Just keep quiet and don’t struggle and everything will be just fine.” Two more men carry a body in and place it on the bed. Kelly stares at it with horror. Her eyes darting to and fro between the Doctors as they unroll a leather tool pouch packed with surgical instruments. 

      Her eyes widened as Tumblety hacked into the body’s face…blood sprayed across the wall. She’s dragged out into the street by two men and bundled into a waiting carriage and driven off at speed.

                                                                                             ***

      Cream and Tumblety hack at the meat on the bed. No longer human, the corpse has become an anatomical specimen. Cream halts for a moment breathing heavily. He looks around and back down at their handiwork. The shadowy candle light reveals blood splatters gleaming on the wall...light reflects off the glistening organs strewn around the bed. He covers his mouth, dry retching before he brings it under control. He turns to Tumblety. “Jesus! Isn’t this enough?” Tumblety stares at him...all human expression gone, eyes black sockets devoid of expression. “This is the last one...it has to be spectacular...and unrecognisable ...I want it so her own mother won’t recognise her...”

      He leans forwards and slices deliberately, his tongue licking at his dry lips...he looks reptilian in the light from the fire and the candles... Cream turns away and throws up.

                                                                                              ***






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        Nicola Sarjeant liked the forum thread, PAYING FOR BOOKS
        Some of my customers that do not have Facebook or Twitter accounts have found it very difficult to "join" INKSHARES.  They go onto the site and try and add an email and a password...they are then told that their password and email are not recognised (probably because they are not members) they then have to go to "forgotten password?" and click on that, pick up the link from their email and then log back in.  Obviously a customer will give up before bothering to do this.  I watched over someone trying to buy from their mobile to get them to the final buying page.  Again I think this is just a bug, I only know two people that don’t have Facebook, luckily I found out about this glitch from one of them. 
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          Nicola Sarjeant liked the forum thread, In the morning I'm making waffles (with some rant on the side)
          I’m going to waffle on here about a few topics: writing a book, credit swapping, and Inkshares business model.

          I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again. I’m not a natural author. I don’t consider myself a writer, but a storyteller. It comes from my gaming background. The ability to think quickly on the fly, the ability to plan and anticipate what the rats inside your maze might do. These are the things that make a good GM  - but only some of those skills transfer over to being a writer and it’s been a steep learning curve.

          To calm the voice in my head from a story that just wouldn’t shut up, I made the decision to tell this story to a significantly broader audience than just a few friends. I started not knowing what medium that was. Graphic novel? Write it as a script? Write it as a novel? I honestly had no idea, and someone said write it as a novel and then it can be anything. Enter Nanowrimo and a co-author - and now I have something, Something that really excites me. Something that I can see the shape and feel the texture. Something I think that will excite others.

          So now I just need to find them and I chose Inkshares. Like many here, I’m not exactly flush with lots of friends and family that can financially support the project, certainly not enough to get it into production given the target.

          So what to do?

          I looked at novel swaps - and have done a few, but honestly, it feels icky. I can’t tell if people doing the swapping are genuinely interested in the project, or just doing it it to get one order closer to that magic threshold. The whole business of getting credits revolves around referrals. So, am I meant to spam the people who’ve been kind enough to follow the project with constant referrals? (Sure feels that way given the number of recommendation messages I get - 300 recommendations in a week?!?!). You know what? I don’t care about credits. When I get them, great, I’ll go look for something to support. Will I attempt to spam refer and novel swap? No, no I will not.

          I’ve used my credits in the goodwill train on projects that I’m genuinely interested in. I’ve made rare referrals, on things I genuinely want to see made into a book, but I’m over credits.

          As an author I don’t need credits, I don’t need to waste time jumping through hoops to try and get them so I can somehow game the system. I need access to an audience of people who will genuinely want to see my project come to fruition.

          What would I like to see?
          It’s harder than I thought to connect to readers on the Inkshares site. A big part of that is my fault. I need to write a synopsis that doesn’t give away the plot bunnies and sounds engaging enough to have someone plonk down some dollars on the hope that one day this will be an actual book. At the moment its a half-assed job, but I’ve been so busy in doing the edits and getting to that wow this is really exciting stage that its fallen by the wayside. It’s something I’ll work on shortly, but the crucial thing here is time. I don’t have enough of it. I imagine I’m not alone in this. 

          Part of this is Inkshares fault. The way the system is now, I don’t know if I am wasting what little precious time I have or not. I know they are a new startup and still figuring out this whole hybrid model of publishing, but the current model and process is making things harder.

          I read some of the content in the recent Reddit Q&A and there was an interesting stat in there. At present there are about 10 readers for every author project (and they are working to increase this to 100:1 or 1000:1). Cool - that’s what this author needs, an audience, it’s what every author  here is looking for.

          So lets look at the readers, do an example, and click on Thaddeus Woodman. When I click on Thaddeus I’m looking for clues to whether or not Thad would like the project enough to plonk down some money. What clues have I got? He has some text under his name - Great! (many times it’s blank, or has a generic ’an avid reader’).

          Cofounder of Inkshares; producer of code and books.  Questions about Inkshares? Email me: thad@inkshares.com - Okay that doesn’t tell me whether he’d like my book, or whether I’d waste my time in pitching him. Ooh he has some circles on his picture indicating he’s supported other books - Great! Hovering over each of these tells me what these projects are.

          Blasted by Adversity, Slim and the Beast, the cats Pyjama’s, Abomination, The future of men.   Are any of those in my genre?

          I go look at each one Memoir, fiction narrative, childrens book, historical fantasy, non-fiction book.  Not looking good.  

          Then I can go through his recent history - Ooh he followed a sci-fi! and when I look on the right hand side, he’s recommended one as well. 

          So maybe he’d be interested in my project. Pitch.

          How much time did that take? 

          Now let’s put on our time travelling hat and travel into the future where Inkshares is a thousand times bigger. While now there is likely to be far more people who will like my book, I still have to find them...somehow. I still have to laboriously pan for flecks of possible reader gold in the muddy water.

          Suggestions
          Credits
          I don’t care about credits - it makes me wonder what your reasoning was in introducing them in the first place. It’s free money, and it just makes people nuts. What did you think would happen when you throw suitcases of filthy cash into the air in a crowded place? 

          As an Author I don’t want credits, give them to Readers, ONLY to readers. More cashed up readers = good. More cashed up authors desperate to get their novel published = ticket to crazy town.

          Pay me when the book reaches target, and make that process as easy as possible. 

          If you HAVE to give me credits - give me something I can gift as a prize to my loyal followers.  Have Author Credits - transferable and Readers Credits - purchasable.

          Readers
          It would be far more time efficient to find an audience if I knew what genre of books readers liked. Sure, can’t hold a gun to their head and force them to tell us, but Inkshares should make it easy for Readers to connect to Authors. 

          Send out a survey, (reward participation with Reader Credits), find out what genre they want to read and pass this info on to Authors. Feed us pitches, feed us leads, we are trying to SELL something after all.

           A searchable option for authors to FIND those people would be amazing and save enormous time and effort...especially when Inkshares gets much bigger.
           
          Okay - Waffles and rant over.  Back to editing.

          Julian
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            Nicola Sarjeant liked an update for The Madness of Mr. Butler

            Here it is...the final three days of the contest! Now is the time to act if you haven’t supported "The Madness of Mr. Butler" with a pre-order yet! 

            The competition is still tight, and I need everyone’s help. There is no guaranteed place in this contest until it is over. I wish everyone in the contest the absolute best. I know I’m exhausted from how difficult this journey has been...

            ...but I’m not too exhausted to write! I have more!

            Chapter 8 is posted, and you can read it here.

            "The Diary of Mr. Butler" has a new entry, and you can read it here.

            I also want to reiterate how honored I am to have reached quill already, an achievement hoped for by every author on this site. I am humbled. I want to thank every single person who has supported my journey thus far. Thank you.

            Composing The Madness of Mr. Butler has been an amazing experience. I love this book. I love writing it. I love reading and editing it. I love watching it evolve, and I love the characters. I truly feel that this is a book that deserves publishing. I am 100% confident in this novel, and I feel in my heart that you will, too. This novel is my child, and like any good mother, I want the best for my child. So please, if you haven’t ordered a copy, do so today. If you’ve already ordered a copy, I am compelled to ask you to spread the word. Every reader counts, and these last couple of days will count heavily. I need you all. Mr. Butler needs you. Let’s make this thing happen. 

            As always, feel free to contact me. I am willing to help with anyone else’s novel as well, so do not hesitate to write to me: madmrbutler@gmail.com

            I wish everyone the best in this contest. Thank you for your support. 

            Love, 

            -Michael
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              Move over Jack Ryan and Jack Reacher, Peter Ryan has you beat!  In Sync City tough enforcer Jack Trevayne is a no nonsense "Keeper"  whose job it is to keep the timelines clean.  Right from the start we are left in no doubt that Jack is a mans man who doesn't take no, or a punch in the face for an answer.  Peter's debut Sync City novel catapults us right into the action and continues world building as we hurtle through the plot alongside our hero. With a sequel on the way and a third novel brewing,  Peter Ryan is a world class talent to watch out for! I've bought a few copies and I urge you to do the same...I also bet my fedora that we'll be watching this on our video holograms in an alternative multiverse  damn soon!
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                Move over Jack Ryan and Jack Reacher, Peter Ryan has you beat!  In Sync City tough enforcer Jack Trevayne is a no nonsense "Keeper"  whose job it is to keep the timelines clean.  Right from the start we are left in no doubt that Jack is a mans man who doesn't take no, or a punch in the face for an answer.  Peter's debut Sync City novel catapults us right into the action and continues world building as we hurtle through the plot alongside our hero. With a sequel on the way and a third novel brewing,  Peter Ryan is a world class talent to watch out for! I've bought a few copies and I urge you to do the same...I also bet my fedora that we'll be watching this on our video holograms in an alternative multiverse  damn soon!
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