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Dearest Readers,

We’ve managed to pull into third place! It’s a precariously small lead of only 5 pre-orders, so our work is far from done, but thank you all from the bottom of my heart for helping me achieve this success. I must check the scores five times a day (possibly more) to see how I’m doing in the rankings. As we’ve risen in sales, so have my competitors. I know they’re just as anxious to rank in the top three as I am, so I’m not surprised. 

After my graduation ceremony at Stanford, where I read an excerpt of my novel (very fun), I went to a workshop on getting published and how to market one’s work. I’ve taken that input to heart and will be trying a few things over the next week to see if I can gain some distance on my 4th and 5th place competitors. If I find any strategies that work, I’ll be sure and share them with you all.

Individual notes of gratitude are coming shortly. I just wanted to let you all know that we’re getting there! Only two weeks left to keep pushing for a third place finish and a guaranteed publication of APEX!

Cheers, Debbie

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    Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Where the Sun Sets

    Dear readers & supporters: 

    Thanks to you, I’m almost at 30% of my Quill goal!!!! *insanely happy dance* 

    THANK YOU.

    You can learn more about the story here: https://youtu.be/raE1OpHenZs

    In the video I also talk about a bit about why I’m crowdfunding the publication of my first manuscript, and that is to help empower more people to become creators, while raising awareness & funds for organizations that believe the best innovation comes from the arts and sciences coming together.

    In other words, my goal with this publication is to support local creators who have an appreciation of what the arts AND sciences have to offer!`

    The way I can do this right now is by using my own creation (Where the Sun Sets) as an opportunity- to talk about my experience as a creator, and by using the funds generated to support partner local organizations.

    Over the coming weeks you can expect to learn more about:
    - The incredible organizations I’m partnering with & Why;
    - How our (mine and yours) collective efforts are supporting each one;
    - How these organizations will be supported in perpetuity (or at least, as long as book sales are a thing) by our efforts;
    - And how you can get involved!

    For all my design friends: If you’ve ever dreamed of seeing your work (your own illustrations or designs) on the cover of a published book, stay tuned for BOOK COVER CONTEST DETAILS!!!

    Please stay tuned for updates   

    Thank you for reading & as always, I welcome your feedback and comments.

    - Donna

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      Thomas J. Arnold sent an update for Exile, Magus

      Another Wednesday, another map.

      This one continues east from the previous map of the Blade and Badlands.

      As one goes further north and east the horrors of the Badlands, only rarely crossing the borders formed by river at the east and mountains to the north.  The mountains also mark the southernmost border of the Zaltruscan empire, though this fact is sometimes forgotten thanks to the presence of small outposts of Zaltruscan soldiers in those towns and cities of the Badlands most vital to the trade routes.

      The eastern border of the Zaltruscan empire is formed by two branches of the World’s Cleft river springing out from the continent’s largest (and most unusual) lake - Lake Moiyrnthan.  Pentaz’ travels take him no where near this during Magus, but it is seen in book 2 (Exile, Hunted) as well as book 3 (tentatively titled Exile, Seventh).  If you want to read about the dwarven trios visit to the Lake I’ve posted it up on the Exile, Hunted page and you can read it here.  It covers the unusual nature of both the Lake and World Cleft rivers as well as the myths surrounding them.

      Across from the Lake is a small corner of Hanaen and its various counties.  Crossing the river south from this you have plateaus upon which two more counties of Hanaen sit, only the westernmost of which is visible in this map.  These plateaus descend southward into the great Kalthean desert which expands further east than is visible here, and also encroaches west back into the Badlands.

      The massive bridge visible is a towering marvel of engineering built during the last days of the Melexi and Thirosian empires, and judging by the nature of the markings and decorations it was presumably a Melexi construction.  The bridge’s immense size means that an army could easily fit on it, making it the most vulnerable point of defense against Zaltruscan invasion for modern day Hanaen.  As a result there is a small military outpost of Hanaen to guard and man the bridge.  A handful of Magi skilled in hydromancy are stationed with the soldiers here, their control over water allowing them to more rapidly use the bridge’s hydraulic mechanisms to raise the bridge to prevent an invasion should the Zaltruscan empire try to march an army across it.

      That’s all I’ve got for today.  We picked up in orders for a short bit, but have levelled off again, so I’m hoping I can get more orders coming in soon.  We’re only 2 new readers away from me being able to release a new chapter, and if we reach that before the end of today(10/19) I’ll go ahead and release 2 new chapters.  Also from this point until the end of the campaign I’ll be lowering the threshold for new chapters from 50 readers each to 20 readers each, hopefully I’ll get to share more of the story and at least hit Quill by the time this campaign ends.

      Thanks to everyone for your support and time.  Friday I’ll be talking a bit about dragons.  Keep reading and enjoying!  (Also, for my D&D people, I meant to post a stat block for a peculiar animal with last week’s map, but forgot to so you’ll be getting that below.)


      This is an animal which Quelzhumi turns into during a pivotal moment of Part 7 - Graduation, and I’m ashamed to admit that I’ve not gotten around to coming up with a name for it.  So for the time being we’ll just refer to it as Sloth-Bear-Anteater-thing.  Quick description from Part 7 before I move on to the stats.

      It hunches over him, but even in this stance it is a towering beast who’s head is a full yard above the lieutenant’s. This massive head is dominated by five almost comically oversized and lidless eyes which form a semicircle around the front. The eyes are flanked by large bat-like ears, and the entire face draws suddenly in and forward from these, reaching a length of nearly a yard and coming to a tapered point just barely larger than a man’s thumb. This snout is nearly all nose on the outside with multi-layered teeth and absurdly long tongue inside. The creature has no recognizable neck, only a widening of its frame drastically down from the ears, so that its shoulders are just a foot below the snout’s beginning but are over six feet wide.

      The trunk and legs beneath have the shape and proportions commonly seen in a bear, but the arms are another matter entirely. They are monstrous protrusions crowding against the beast’s trunk where they sprout from the shoulders and are easily two feet thick. Their length is ill proportioned to the body, being nearly ten feet long before the claws protrude. These claws are the most terrifying features on the beast. Three spring from each otherwise featureless paw, with each an equally sized mixture of sabre and shovel head measuring a foot wide at their bases and tapering down along the two feet of their length.

      The claws mentioned in the description are normally used to dig into ant-hills or other insect mounds(or termite infested trees), but there still pretty deadly weapons.  The actual animals are rarely seen because they’re actually a bit cowardly, preferring to run from humans or other potential predators, but they will fight if forced to(though only a fool would force one to really).  Now for stats.

      Large Beast,  Neutral

      Armor Class:  10 (natural)

      Hit Points:  92 (8d10+48)

      Speed:  15’ / Burrow 5’

      Str 20 (+5),  Dex 5 (-3),  Con 22 (+6),  Int 2 (-4),  Wis 12 (+1),  Cha 6 (-2)

      Senses:  passive Perception 11,  Tremorsense 10’

      Challenge 3 (700 XP)

      Relentless (recharges after a Short or Long Rest):  if it takes 13 damage or less that would reduce it to 0 hit points, then it is reduced to 1 hit point instead.

      Wounded Fury:  while it has only 10 or fewer hit points, it has Advantage on Attack rolls.  In addition, it deals an extra 2d6 ; damage to any target it hits with a melee attack while this is active.

      Claw: melee weapon attack,  +7 to hit (3d8 +5 piercing) ;

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        Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Murder at the Veterans’ Club

        Dear friends and followers,

        First, allow me to introduce another one of the characters from "Murder at the Veterans’ Club": William Mainwaring, brother of Oscar Mainwaring. Not a member of the club himself, since he never fought, but intimately linked to it through his brother.

        Next, I want to introduce to (some of ) you another book on Inkshares that has caught my attention: "Manifesto", by Daniel Poort. It’s classed as "horror", but there’s a strong mystery/crime/thriller element as well, dealing as it does with a serial killer and the small town sheriff investigating the crimes. It’s a reminder that you really don’t need supernatural shenanigans to make a horror story: the mind of an ordinary person can be a terrifying place.

        And now I must run. It is, as I’ve mentioned before, IFcomp season, and there is a ton of interactive fiction in this year’s crop. Anyone who’s stopped by my blog will know that it is completely taken over by my ongoing reviews. So I’m busy! So until next time, keep busy, keep reading, and make sure you’re having fun while you’re at it. Ciao!

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          Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Illegal

          750! We did it.

          Thank you. This is a dream realized for me, and I couldn’t have done it without the support of so many of you.

          What’s next: I’ll be assigned an editor and together we’ll work on making Illegal the best it can be, a design team will work on the books look,  and then the marketing team will take over. Finally, Inkshares will mail out your copy and distribute Illegal to bookstores throughout the country. Hard to say exactly when that will be, but my best guess would be in the later half of 2017. I’ll send infrequent updates when there is relevant information to share, like a firm publication date.  

          Keep sharing this story. And keep encouraging others to buy this book.

          Onward and upward.


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            Dear friends

            Bad Medicine: Slay it Queen! was selected as the book of the month by the Snarky Darksy Syndicate. This was an amazing surprise. I had no idea your humble drag queen had been nominated. I want to thank all the members of the syndicate  for choosing my book. Your support means the world to me.

            On other important news, the inspiration behind Bad Medicine, Alaska Thunderfuck, was crowned last night RuPaul Drag Race All Star winner. As a huge Alaska fan, I am double happy. I was rooting for her from the beginning.

            (from the left my husband Tom, Alaska, my friend Koleen and I)

            That is all for today. As always, thank you for your support. We have only two weeks left in the contest and Bad Medicine: Slay it Queen is still in second place. That is good news, but I have to keep pushing. The contest is not over until is over and there are many other deserving books that could kick me out of the top 3.


            Have a wonderful weekend!

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              Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for APEX

              My sincerest thanks to all of you who have pre-ordered a copy of APEX and recommended to your friends to pre-order as well. I’m now within 6, yes SIX, pre-orders of 3rd place. Of course, the competition isn’t standing still, but with my new fantastic video trailer on YouTube and Inkshares found here: 

               https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YNj-LN9ss0s 

              created by the amazing Christopher Lee, author of The Lore of Aos Si (Check out his novel on Inkshares.com), I have a chance to push ahead.

              Thank you so much for all of your continued support. Please help me make this last push to forge ahead in the contest so I can get my book published and into your hands!

              Cheers, Debbie

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                Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Dragonford- The Long Highway

                We are now at 100 preorders! That leaves Dragonford with quite a hill left to climb, but I am happy to reach this personal milestone. I hope you all have been enjoying the updates and material. Thank you for coming along for the ride. For those still waiting to make a purchase, I hope you will consider securing a preorder in the coming days. If you have made your purchase, be sure to use the Recommend button. Only 18 days left to go!

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