Ah, I’m looking for digital prints and commissions for marketing and websites. If you can’t upload it, I think @Luke Fellner there is absolutely no way we could work together. :( It’s a shame because paintings and hand drawn sketches are neat, but that’s not what I’m looking for. 

Thank you all again for following me. My progress has been rather smooth lately. High School starts up this month, but that actually means I’ll get more writing in. My school gives us laptops so when I finish all my work I get writing done. You will also start seeing updates during the day instead of midnight. This is just a heads up, I’m looking for any feedback I can get so please tell your friends about The Burned.

Thanks Luke! The feedback is much appreciated. I can definitely see what you mean about how characters are feeling. I always find that one a tricky one to balance, to avoid getting too lost in their thoughts. Something to think about when editing!

@Kristopher Bryson Great sample chapter, very intriguing and well put together. One thing I’d like to suggest is adding more details about how the scene effects the characters. But overall you did a great job at writing this and good luck with your campaign!