Luke Fellner commented on The Burned
I’d appreciate any feedback for my first few chapters. It’ll take about 17 minutes to read through all 4, but I’m sure it will keep you interested. Any feedback will be helpful!
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    Luke Fellner liked the forum thread, Recording audiobooks
    Thanks for the tips - especially @Darcy Conroy  and @Luke Fellner for such detailed thoughts!
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      Luke Fellner commented on A New Dawn Coming
      @Chad Legge Great job at being descriptive and writing down what the eye would say if it could write (paraphrasing The Book Thief, good movie). Reading through this is like reading a painting. One thing I’d like to suggest is going further into the thoughts of Faux. But overall, great job!
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        A New Dawn Coming
        When Faux’s latest contract goes bad he’s forced to run or face the noose. Lost and alone, a chance meeting soon has him scouring the countryside for a lost religious artifact. What they find however may upset the balance of the world, and the Gods.
        Luke Fellner commented on The Burned
        I’m happy to say I’ve posted the next few chapters. These three segments show Jay’s perspective. I hope you enjoy them, and any comments will be appreciated!
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          Luke Fellner commented on an excerpt of The Burned
          @J. Graham-Jones Thank you! I was wondering how I could replace that, "I harshly whispered..." sounds better.
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            Luke Fellner liked the forum thread, Gollancz writers festival
            I’m certainly going to try and promote the Inkshares community to anyone who hasn’t heard of it before :)
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              Luke Fellner commented on an excerpt of The Burned
              @Scott Carss Thank you for the input, I’m looking at editing these sections, what I’m trying to get across was that he was angrily whispering, but angrily whispered doesn’t sound very good.
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