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Apologies that I have been out of touch for a while. I think I can find some reason to blame 2020, but the reality is over the last six months, I’ve gone through three more major drafts of the book. Each stage involved putting the manuscript aside for a few weeks and then reading it objectively and thinking hard about what was working in the story and what wasn’t. A lot of effort was spent beefing up the characters to make sure the story felt authentic and modern, rather than just some ’50s noir pastiche. 

There was also a major improvement a few months ago which involved changing who the killer is. That took a lot of thinking but surprisingly it did not require that much rewriting, impacting only the last quarter of the book. Nonetheless, it greatly strengthened the theme of the story which centers around the relationship between two brothers, one of whom dies in World War II while the surviving brother deals with the loss. 

 This is a good segue to let people know that this has not been a solo effort. My brother Mike has been my uncredited co-author for quite some time now. He’s forced me to give up some of the early writing that I’d clung to for too long, sometimes expressed by writers as “Kill your darlings.” Having a co-author meant I could finally let that happen but I didn’t have to witness the gruesome deed myself. 

 The book is now called “The Man from Mittelwerk,” which puts the story’s historical context front and center. I’ll be sending it to the publisher Monday. No doubt there be a few weeks before we get his feedback and then hopefully only light editing will be required. Given the impact that Covid has had on the publishing industry, I suspect the publication date will be some time next year. 

 As always, thank you for your support of this project. If you want to drop me a line and tell me what you’re up to, I would love to hear from you. Don’t hit reply to this email. Instead email me at ZUrlocker@hotmail.com. With that, I’m gonna have a beer. Cheers!
--Zack
PS. Here’s a picture from last year’s Bouchercon writer’s conference where I met a favorite author Max Allan Collins. He has a terrific series that features a writer / detective named Mallory. One of his books in this series is appropriately enough called “Kill Your Darlings” and is set at an earlier Bouchercon conference.    

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    I HAVE NEWS!

    This dragged on longer than any of us expected but hey I think that’s true for so much related to the virus. So first of all THANK YOU for your patience.

    The intrepid Avalon from Inkshares will brave the wilds next week to receive the books from the printer finally (and hopefully ship out all 404 paperback copies to you folks!). Since it’s been a while, it would be a huge help if you could check your address and update it if you moved since you last entered it.

    How would I do that Tom?

    Glad you asked!

    To change your address, please log in, go to your profile, click Account, then Address. You can edit this any time.

    SO sorry these print copies took so long to get to you but every excited they are finally going to see some sunshine. Poor little books. All cramped up inside. I think many of us know how they feel.

    Tom

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      Aloha All,

      The ebooks of Lost in the Fog are now available!

      Everyone who pre-ordered Lost in the Fog will receive an email from Inkshares with a link to download it.  If you bought a paperback, the ebooks were included with the purchase.

      Your downloads will be in three different formats: mobi (Kindle), Epub (Apple books), and Adobe PDF (which can be read on any device).  Please check your email, and if you haven’t received it, please let me know. 

      Paperback books will be mailed in October.

      Thank you all again for your support!!!

      -Michael


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        Noah Broyles liked an update for Going, Going, Gone!
        Oh the wheels of publishing grind along slowly! But at Inkshares they do continue to grind.

        My time-travel-baseball novel "Going, Going, Gone!" is now in the department of copy editing, with a great copy editor who is a baseball fan. How long will this take? If I had to bet, I’d say six weeks. Then it’s on to the other stations of book production.

        2020 has not turned out the way anyone predicted. So I appreciate that the book process is moving along. I appreciate good health, good air (when the wind blows out the bad), and a great family. I appreciate being able to watch the game on TV, listen on the radio, watch kids practicing on our local field, and I appreciate playing catch with my son.

        One moment from the writing process: I was listening to a game through the MLB app, writing a scene about a game in 1906, when my son walked into the room, grabbed a bat, and began loudly crushing his bungee-cord batting machine. Baseball in my brain, in my ears, and before my eyes.

        I’ve spent seven years working on "Going, Going, Gone!" What’s another few months?

        Sincerely,

        Steve
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