Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of The Knight Proper
I know exactly how you feel, Mela. :)
like

People who have liked this comment on a chapter of <i>The Knight Proper</i>

    Joseph Asphahani highlighted an excerpt from The Knight Proper
    It’s all playing with my head,
    Read Chapter
    Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of The Knight Proper
    This part ... ambiguous... in a good way. Is there really some entity inhabiting the skull, or is this all in her mind? Is Mela crazy? A seed well planted in this chapter. I love it!
    like

    People who have liked this comment on a chapter of <i>The Knight Proper</i>

      Joseph Asphahani highlighted an excerpt from The Knight Proper
      simply taking it all in. Mela wasn’t sure if it was listening anymore or if it had gone dormant, but she’d started this story and she was going to finish it.
      Read Chapter
      Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of The Knight Proper
      That is an amazing visual... It shows exactly what's happening and yet at the same time leaves descriptive gaps in just the right places for me to imagine it in my own way. To see that, what does that LOOK like? Great writing!
      like · liked by Kelsey

      People who have liked this comment on a chapter of <i>The Knight Proper</i>

        Joseph Asphahani highlighted an excerpt from The Knight Proper
        She could see the blue eyes creeping out from the dark sockets once again
        Read Chapter
        Joseph Asphahani followed Manjaro
        Manjaro
        An avid reader.
        Follow
        Joseph Asphahani followed Reader Writer
        Reader Writer
        Follow
        Joseph Asphahani liked an update for The Garden of Oroborous

        So big thanks to A.C. Weston and Jen Elizabeth Rose for their reviews. They certainly made my day.  As promised each will have a dreadnought class vessel named after them. Congrats to all the great writers turned reviewers over the weekend. Don't forget to tell your friends about The Garden of Oroborous! 

        SMH
        like · liked by Joseph and 1 other

        People who have liked this reader update

          More items